The Deadly Seven

The Deadly Seven, once they got to Hell, were boasting of effects they’d had on men. Each one of them had their own tale to tell. And Pride, of course the first one to begin, related how he’d caused the Romans’ Fall. Said Envy, “Murder first began with me.” “When Cain killed Abel?” Lust laughed. “Is that all? I caused an even greater misery by making God’s most loved of kings go bad.” Then Anger bellowed, “David did not kill as many men as those who kill when mad! Crazed killers give the best of us a chill!" “But think of all the wars I’VE made,” said Greed, “influencing those hungry for control.” “Ah, yes,” said Glutton, chiming in, “Indeed,” “you guys sure did your best to steal each soul. I only made men love too much to dine, yet I’m with you six guys at Satan’s gate!” Then Satan screamed, “You fools are last in line! You’re checking in behind the Hateful Eight!” Written Jan. 28, 2016
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Misra Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 9:17 PM
I always loved ole Nick - always has something up his sleeve! Loved the poem. Well deserved win as usual. Congrats. ~kc~
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations Andrea....pd
Williams Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Very clever Andrea. I really enjoyed this. Congrats on your win.
Zozulya Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Excellent! I couldn't of said it any better.
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Nothing like a switch on what was expected. You do this so well. The conversation was quite amusing. So, let me only say that you are a master! As I commented to someone in the same contest...I have to focus on what to fix first. There's just too many ways to go bad!!
Laurie Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Hello Andrea ... after a sinful journey you gave us the comeuppance the deadly season deserved with humour - well done Andrea - Lindsay
Walker Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:01 AM
How you interweave the 7 deadly sins into this and interjected the movie into the last line, interesting.
Muzzey Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:04 PM
You did a wonderful job with this topic Andrea. Best to you in the contest, I'm sure it is a top winner. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Andrea, you outdid yourself with this clever and creative write! I thoroughly enjoyed the way you wove all seven ( eight?) deadly sins into your very imaginative, yet Biblically correct, poem! Outstanding and I hope you rank at the top of the contest :)
Turner Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Very creative. I saw that movie. Your poem was better than the movie. At least your poem made me smile. I'll give you a two thumbs up.
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Good idea on this one..If for a contest reads like a winner..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Nunez Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:09 AM
A very creative take on the prompt, Andie! Loved it! PS. Which is the 8th? hugs :-)))
Inman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Loved the write Andrea. Great interpretation of the theme.
Horsman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Andrea you never fail to amaze me, What the hell goes through your mind, Only God knows, and you of course,,but the fall-out you put to paper truly are wonderful..
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:09 AM
- This is great, Andrea - Some powerful lines - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Docherty Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 3:43 AM
Great tale you weave with your take on the 7 deadly sins and the devils work... A poignant reminder for all too in a gentle way. Pen on ...
Anish Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:40 PM
The world is so filled with temptation. In the Jewish religion there is the Sitra Archa - the evil impulse. Yes, it even reached out to King David. Stimulating work here1 Peace & Love Matthew Anish
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Brilliant take on theme Andrea.. Gl in contest!
Vaso Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:20 PM
This is amazing, and before reading this I was so sure the deadly seven where females! :) Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Wow Andrea, you were really inspired by this contest. Great wit! I love this one and hope it takes top honors. #7
May Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 5:46 PM
Well penned Andrea...very creative
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Very unique take on the theme and i love the clever rhyme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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