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The dead come to visit me, although they are all very dead, they wake my sweet sleep calling out my name, and I am entwined with these shadows! I make some coffee and sit in the living room. I wait sipping and gasping for fresh air. But, suddenly the dead are above me and, sitting there beside me on my thread-bare flowered sofa we cling to each other. All my loved dead souls gathered in my living room, beside me holding my hand is my dear long gone mother, and grandma is close in her old rocking chair rocking, but, they are just hazy, gauzy shadows. (I am holding my baby) Others sit quietly waiting to speak. I turn to my father on my right and ask, dad how is it you are here? He starts to weep, oh we are the dead who did not want to die in life, we did not want to leave, so, we come back to visit and to keep you close to our souls. Dad, do you roam other places or just come here in my dreams? (My husband places a cold kiss on my lips, touches my hair.) Or dad perhaps this is not a dream? and he answers, oh yes daughter I roam the forests, I loved in life, watch the birds flying, the water rippling, that is where you will find me, and mother tells me, she is always beside, inside protecting me, and grandma rocks and sweetly whispers, I never leave you. Then, I wake to birds peacefully chirping a lovely song outside, yet, I know at night the dead will be back to visit me. _____________________ November 10, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/The Dead Visit Copyright Protected, ID 18-1084-156-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Free Verse In November, 2018, sponsor, Lu Loo Third Place

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Date: 1/5/2019 8:04:00 PM
A beautiful read. Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Date: 12/23/2018 12:55:00 PM
I can feel your grief in your perfect words, what a wonderful poem! Congrats on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2018 9:11:00 AM
Josephine, thanks for visiting my poem with a comment and congrats. Yes my grief is both beautiful and cruel, and is forever ~
Date: 12/23/2018 11:24:00 AM
yes they will visit you, not to scare you but because they love you dearly sweet Dear Heart. You have such a gift that never ceases to amaze me...Thank you and congratulations on your placement. :)-luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2018 9:10:00 AM
Lu, thanks for the contest and for my great placement, your contests always take me to a deep and dark place and inspire my muse ~
Date: 11/25/2018 9:41:00 PM
Thank you Ibohal for visiting my poem and for commenting ~
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Date: 11/24/2018 10:33:00 PM
Ya, they return with sweet memories and break our hearts. Wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2018 9:08:00 AM
Ibohal, thanks for the visit and for understanding and for the wonderful, appreciate ~
Date: 11/10/2018 10:28:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting and for the comment, yes this is a dark poem of my longing for these dead souls, that I loved so much in life. My forever grief. A recurring nightmare that haunts me, yet somehow fulfills my need for my ever connection with them. Oddly sinister but beautiful in a way.
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Date: 11/10/2018 10:01:00 AM
WOW....this is a poignantly painful peek into the lingering intensity of grief.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2018 9:07:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting my poem with that great comment ~

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