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The Day's New Sun

Across villages and country lanes Below church spires and weather vanes, The mornings mist, like ghostly veils Floats o'er the hills, the fields and dales. Upon the flowers, morning dew Glittering, in lustrous hue. Across the land all are waking, Ready to start the day anew. The days new Sun begins to rise, Revealing azure morning skies. Happily we greet that golden ball, Bringer of light and life to all. Early birds begin to sing, Full of the joys that mornings bring. In full throated song they greet the Sun, Their serenade loved, by everyone.

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Date: 9/18/2017 4:00:00 PM
Gary, this is such a dreamy and beautiful poem and I love your image too
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/18/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:10:00 PM
This is a glorious song to the dawn of a new day, Gary. Very nice!
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/18/2017 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 9/16/2017 6:38:00 PM
I agree with Heidi...a nicely constructed little poem -- well done, Gary! All the best. :) john
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/16/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thank you John :)
Date: 9/16/2017 2:47:00 PM
Very nice to read today Gary. Beautiful :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/16/2017 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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