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The Day the Earth Stood Still

The Day the Earth Stood Still
The First Tower
 
I’m dialing
my wife.
An airplane
has crashed through
my office wall.
Two stockbrokers
are carrying a torn and
shivering secretary 
to the broken
staircase. The elevators
have sunken in
to the shaft.
“Honey, Call these numbers,”
I say. They are of families
we have never met.
She tells them their loved ones
are safe. Several people 
climb toward the roof.
The fire department says
it’s the safest place.
They return saying
The door is locked. 
Just in case, I say,
“Honey, I love you. Tell
the kids, I love them.”
Suddenly, a ball of fire.


Written in response to the 9/11 disaster.
Taken from the book,
The Breathng House Imagist Poems, 2006, by Marcielle Brandler
Amazon.com
Marcielle Brandler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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September 26, 2026 at 8:52 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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December 25, 2019 at 3:47 AM
A tribute to a truly horrific day. Welcome to Soup.
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