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The Day My Lover Left

The day my lover left it was a winter snow storm, I begged him not to go but he just laughed at me; I snuggled under my blanket and was soon asleep, And in my dream, I heard the loud crash. The crunch of metal and then there was silence, My spirit floated above the battered car, ethereal; And that is where I found him beautifully dead, Hair a tangled raven cloud, I hovered above. My spirit kissed his cold blue lips, goodby love, I lingered holding him close to my broken heart; I woke up suddenly- loud knocking on the front door, Two police officers were standing there. We regret to inform you . . . . ______________________________ March 14, 2016 Poetry/Verse/The Day My Lover Left Copyright Protected, ID 16-768-170-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Day My Lover Left sponsor, Skat Third Place

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Date: 4/13/2016 8:19:00 PM
Oh my, once again you have taken us to a tearful place with your words. Nicely done, Constance !! Congrats to you!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 3:18:00 PM
Carrie, oh yes, I can make any theme sad, lol, thanks for the compliment and the congrats !!!
Date: 4/13/2016 1:57:00 PM
Well done B/W, congratulations on your win...
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 3:19:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !!
Date: 4/13/2016 12:55:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest **SKAT**
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Date: 4/14/2016 3:22:00 PM
Skat, thanks for that great contest and for my placement, appreciate ~
Date: 3/16/2016 2:14:00 PM
Beautiful sad write BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2016 12:07:00 PM
James, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 3/14/2016 10:49:00 PM
What a great creation!!!! I still shivering after reading this poem... Simply the best!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 8:55:00 AM
Anand, thanks so much for visiting my poem, appreciate the compliment !
Date: 3/14/2016 2:26:00 PM
Your words paint quite vivid images of your expressions! Very, very well put and imaged...Poetess Broken Wings!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2016 4:34:00 PM
Walter, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the compliments, appreciate !
Date: 3/14/2016 12:27:00 PM
Such a sweet and sad write Broken Wings. Hugs, Rahy
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 2:48:00 PM
I meant Rahy of course, sorry ...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2016 4:59:00 PM
Rayh, thanks for visiting and for the compassion !

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