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The Day My Daughter Died

The day my daughter died, my heart was not only broken and shattered but it was ripped into pieces and my thoughts were so scattered. The day my daughter died, I had to be strong. Cant show emotion, because showing weakness to others was wrong. The day my daughter died, I thought my family would fall apart. Because of this grief, I didn't think I had enough love in my heart. The day my daughter died, I'd thought I had lost a hope, but how could there be when I couldn't even cope. The day my daughter died, is the day I lost part of my life. My poor sweet husband, lost part of his wife. The day my daughter died, I felt so out of place. There so many people, please get out of my face. The day my daughter died, I fell on my knees. Praying to god and begging him please. The day my daughter died, my heart was so very torn. I though my heart was being stabbed by a extremely sharp thorn. The day my daughter died, I was done, and I didn't want to live. Just to be with my daughter, anything, I would give. The day my daughter died, I cried over a million tears. I don't think Things will ever be alright, not even in years. The day my daughter died, I prayed that she was alright. I hoped that someone held her hand, as she walked into the light. The day my daughter died, I cried myself to sleep. No body heard, because I did not make a peep. The day my daughter died, I think back to that day. This is for you my sweet daughter, so, go off to heaven and go play.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/21/2016 3:53:00 PM
nice to see this one again.. KH>..skat
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Date: 3/17/2015 10:06:00 PM
Kristiena, your poem is heartbreaking. I can't imagine the pain. K,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:34:00 PM
Kristiena, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/11/2015 9:11:00 AM
I am so sorry for your terrible loss, Kristiena. Just reading your words and feeling your heart break as you write really touched me. May God bring you comfort as you grieve your great loss.
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Kristiena Hunter
Date: 3/11/2015 2:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Laura! I am at a very different place with my grief now! :)
Date: 3/10/2015 5:12:00 PM
simply heartbreaking write - - my friend has recently lost her boys aged 19 and 20 and we are all struggling to come to terms with her loss. My heart goes out to you I cannot begin to imagine the pain of losing a child:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2015 5:25:00 PM
Keep writing you will find it so so therapeutic:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kristiena Hunter
Date: 3/10/2015 5:23:00 PM
It's been quite the journey. I am soooo much better now! But, it has definitely been the hardest thing I have ever gone through. Thank you for your sweet words. And, hugs to you friend
Date: 3/10/2015 5:06:00 PM
Grief can be shattering and there are no words from others that can make this right for you. Honoring a memory and moving through the pain and grief is that best we can do sometimes. And that okay. (((Hugs)))
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Kristiena Hunter
Date: 3/10/2015 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am definitely better now. But it really is shattering

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