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the funeral over everyone back to their life as it was she closes the door and waves goodbye thanking all for their support acting brave the shell of her still upright somehow moving on autopilot left to manage in an empty house just her the silence and her tears AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 16, 2020 for contest FLOWER IN THE CRANNIED WALL sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH - HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 3/11/2020 2:57:00 PM
Touching and thought-provoking, like an Emily Dickinson contemplation of death and its aftermath. Death is the universal connection, and you have captured it so poignantly. "the shell of her / still upright / somehow moving / on autopilot". Rich.
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Date: 3/11/2020 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, John.
Date: 3/9/2020 4:39:00 PM
So touching Line. So descriptive of the time after a funeral when the grieving process continues. Congratulations on your HM!
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Date: 3/9/2020 4:54:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/19/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thought provoking and sad. Very well penned, you have captured it with tears.
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Date: 2/19/2020 3:20:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jean.
Date: 2/17/2020 7:14:00 AM
So moving, touching, well done Line very emotional, Julie
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Date: 2/17/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thanks, Julie. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/17/2020 4:19:00 AM
It sucks big time, but finally the tears came. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/17/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kai.
Date: 2/16/2020 10:51:00 PM
The emotions and loneliness strongly conveyed.. Great entry in the contest Line.. Good luck..
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Date: 2/17/2020 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.

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