The Dawning Sun

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Constance's 4 Beautiful Lines Contest March 9, 2025

Glorious, the morning glow when sunrise says, 'Hello.' ~ by poet With wistful eyes I saw him rise, the dawning Sun Over hills he climbed, in hues of a ripened peach He spread golden wings, and a new day had begun His fingers spreading warmth everywhere he reached

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Ann Peck

Date: 3/16/2025 10:23:00 AM

Your lines are beautiful, Lin! Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/16/2025 11:48:00 AM

Thank you very much, Ann.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/12/2025 7:48:00 PM

'His fingers spreading warmth everywhere' that is new read to me, nice. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/16/2025 11:48:00 AM

It sounds comforting though... thanks thriveni

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2025 12:00:00 AM

Back with congratulations to you Lin this one had win written all over it. No chance today as its cloudy here. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 3/12/2025 12:18:00 AM

Good morning, Tom and thank you. It'll be a beautiful one this morning for me to see in a few hours.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/11/2025 10:21:00 PM

Very beautiful, Lin, congratulations:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/12/2025 12:17:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2025 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely Rhyme write you have here. Love your pretty picture and quote. The morning sun is a great time of the day. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................

Lin Lane
Date: 3/11/2025 9:56:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Paula. Your comments are always so kindly offered.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/10/2025 5:56:00 PM

Lin, sounds like a good guy to get to know better. I love how you personify our source of life and energy. Really amazing that we're in a position to reap the advantage of his forces. Smiles!!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/10/2025 6:15:00 PM

Yeah, ol Ra is eager to please as long as we don't get too close, then we both get burned up. Seriously, thank you, Duke.