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The Dawn

Sitting waiting, waiting for the light, anticipating the retreat of the night. The mallards have gathered awaiting their feeding. They always appear to be fiercely competing. A song birds trill permeates the air, spilling out it's chords, tender, fair. A boisterous crow joins the conversation. Flying to and fro with his long winded explanation. The full moon fades tucked somewhere far away, as nature greets a brand new day.

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Date: 7/7/2023 5:18:00 PM
A lovely well rhymed rythmic poem to start my day. Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/8/2023 6:12:00 AM
thanks Bill and again I really liked the cats in hats, so cute. Have a great weekend.
Date: 7/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
what a joy to hear the birds singing in the morning Nancy, thanks for sharing your lovely lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/7/2023 12:14:00 PM
It was a lovely morning here. Have a good weekend Jan and thanks for your kind words and visit. xox Nancy

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