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The Darkest Hour

THE DARKEST HOUR
The darkest hour of the night - hits us just before the morn
This moment of deepest thoughts - before we are re-born
Fleeting in its moment - hard to keep within ones minds clasp
A momentary window of vision - build by nature - not to last
This often fleeting visionary moment - so deep within our soul
Gives us rhyme and reason - to our inner spiritual future goal
Chilling in its moment - as if one almost suffers a small death
The smell of regretfulness and guilt - are often on our breath
Then just as it appears - we are given the day’s first sprig of light
The darkest hour expires - as a new day yearns - all things bright
There is no use in wallowing - of the lessons you have just learnt
Best placed on that imaginary fire within your mind - to be burnt
The darkest and deepest hour of the night - is given for a reason
To teach us how to balance all things in our life - that are uneven
To put the fear of God into us - if we then continue with our sins
We are then given with a new day - to cast off these very things
The darkest hour is called repentance - the new sprig of day hope
Gives us all the strength to carry upwards - on the righteous slope
Those who do not heed the message sent to us by God to - atone
Will be lost in the darkness hour of the night to be forever - alone
Indiana Shaw . . . (*-*)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/8/2017 2:31:00 PM
Powerful truths expressed in this brilliantly written poem, Indiana. Profound wisdom these words bespeak. Magnificent poetry. Love and joy always.
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Date: 11/18/2018 12:17:00 PM
Honoured, Freddie - Indiana x x x
Date: 9/3/2017 4:21:00 AM
Wow, That was a sensational write Indiana. Gently gave the reader a smack in the eyes. Thank you. Kind regards, Craig
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Date: 9/3/2017 5:54:00 PM
'Ello Craig - glad you liked it - hope everyone coped with it . . . ; )
Date: 9/2/2017 1:08:00 PM
Hi Indiana Shaw.. Your poem is really superb and unique..Congrats.. ~S
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Date: 11/18/2018 12:15:00 PM
Appreciated Sameeha - Indy x x x

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