The Dark Poet

She wakes up in a padded room
in an asylum on a hill.
A half a mile from civilization,
spirits loom with an ominous chill.

A skilled
professional in a white cape,
draped,
over casual attire.
enters the room.
A well mannered man, smooth
endearing, 
compassionate,
or so he seemed to be.
in this chemically induced 
dream.

Screams,
trapped in her mind.
the silent kind.
he leans over her mid-section
it is medication time.
Twisting, fighting
to escape her own mind.
Where is that man in the red bow tie?
She lays alone, drugged,
dull, 
a lifeless look in her eye.

slightly crying.
                       
                         Where am I?

Still fighting.

Blurred vision , diminishes.
she walks with a lean.
Headaches, a redundant punishment.
No longer looming in this dream.

To be continued!!!

11/07/09
Name withheld until contest is over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 10:12 AM
Our minds can be our own worst nightmare...you have painted an eerie pic with this one...thought provoking....deep...and can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks so much for sharing! Excellent job! Have a blessed day~Mary
Pickett Avatar
December 13, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Sounds like to many Qualudes....Nice write here Son...I shall have to look for more on this matter...Dad
Norvell Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 2:03 PM
good write love it best wishes.....
Gumbo Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 11:28 AM
...I journey along!
Delacroix Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 10:04 PM
There are so many different kinds of prison either set by others or set by our own sefl and no matter what, they are frightening and they eat at life. I will come back to read the next one. This was chilling. Caroline.
Owens Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 1:45 PM
This is a scary one. The conclusion should be interesting. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Ow to be continued..im curious,,i want to know the finish to the end Jared..intriguing write..i wonder who the compassionate guy,the guy in red tie is...excellent ,,love your writes--CHARMA
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