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The Dark

I hear outside my window the grey dove cry As sun slides down the mountains, and I sigh Watching night curtaining my city Blotting streaks of violet from the sky Shadows start to overtake the little light Left glimmering as day turns into night. He has left me! Easily the dark Empties out the joy in me that once burned bright. No trace of light remains under the door’s crack. The dark, dressed in ebony, slips into pitch black. Melancholy wraps me in my silent room. In anguish, my brain screams out: I want him back!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/29/2021 2:16:00 PM
SO good to read this again Andrea, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2021 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, it's a high great win, and no doubt you deserve it Deep respect
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Date: 3/28/2021 3:05:00 PM
I'm not familiar with this form, but your poem is beautifully written, Andrea! Excellent imagery. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/28/2021 12:51:00 PM
I see from the previous comments that this poem was posted here quite a while ago. I don't know how I could have missed reading this gem. Well written and deserving of winning recognition. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/25/2014 8:06:00 AM
Really sad Andrea! A splendid write n a huge win, big congrats dear!
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Date: 9/23/2014 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations. What an amazing poem. You always knock me out. I will add this to my favs.
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Date: 9/23/2014 3:31:00 PM
Such sadness eloquently penned Andrea...congrats
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:51:00 AM
The image is as if one is standing in the corner of the dark place. Well done, Andrea.....congrats to you...!
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Date: 9/23/2014 7:25:00 AM
Wow Andie powerful last verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2014 6:01:00 AM
Congrats for the high win with this melancholy write, ANDREA
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:19:00 AM
oh this is sad Andrea many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this heart wrenching poem.
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Date: 9/22/2014 9:56:00 PM
congrats on your win in PD's contest Andrea, nicely done
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Date: 9/22/2014 9:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea, you rocked with this poem...Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/6/2012 1:25:00 AM
AMAZING! :D I love this poem. I've always been a sucker for the melancholy, and you really captured a thought and made it something most great. Congrats, on you win by the way. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/14/2012 10:10:00 AM
Belated congrats for this wonderful poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2012 1:36:00 AM
Like this one Andy, I am sure he would never go so you would never have to call him back xx
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:09:00 PM
Andrea, :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:29:00 AM
a wonderfully emotional write, andie... congrats on your fine win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:19:00 AM
congrats on ur win!!! wonderful write..xx..
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Date: 10/2/2012 7:34:00 AM
Sigh...I got caught up in this..some great phrases here..congrats..again..lol. BG
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:43:00 AM
That opening stanza is so artistic sounding...blotting the violet from the sky...very smooth work, Andrea...enjoyed this different sort of write from u! I will email u later this afternoon...have only been moving and working the past few days...luv ya, g.
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:27:00 AM
This is another lovely write from you, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:25:00 AM
This is another lovely write from. Congrats on your win!
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