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The Dancer

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You dance to music from a guitar that yearns The pace of your steps the stage floor it burns In crimson red dress that whirls about With twin castanets that seem to shout Your homage to passion its fruitful desire With burning eyes in a deep flaming fire A strong flashing speed in a whirling daze Your captured movements by a candle's haze Allows our spirits to be consumed By exquisite motion crossing the room I bow to you for your skill is admired Your Spanish dance where passion is required 9/22/17 contest Poems that paint a picture 3

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Date: 9/26/2017 8:22:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic on your win with this excellent poem.
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Date: 9/26/2017 1:07:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win with this outstanding write!
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Date: 9/26/2017 9:28:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR FINE WIN. SUPERB IMAGERY AND COLORS OF BOTH THE DANCER AND - "passion its fruitful desire"!!
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Date: 9/26/2017 7:30:00 AM
Vivid imagery.. Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:08:00 AM
Nice :) xomo!
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