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~3rd Place~
Premiere Contest: Reveal Your Other Muse
Sponsor: Margarita Lillico
Judged: 04/21/2021

~1st Place~
Contest: End of February 2019
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 02/24/2019

~10th Place~
Premiere Contest: Best Sonnet
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 03/03/2018

~1st Place~
Contest: Poems That Paint a Picture - 3
Sponsor: Silent One
Judged: 09/26/2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: Sonnet 4
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Judged: 09/23/2016

Written, October 2, 2015
Entered In The Contest, "Dance Of Dances"
May 31, 2024
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley

The Dance Of Dances

She dances to her music gracefully,
     her choreography, at whim, profound.
With graceful twirls and spins, so dreamily,
     her rhythm flows to music without sound.

She dances to the music only she
     can hear- although I feel its lovely flow
and cadence shape her form; exquisitely
     she falls and rises with an artful show.

No music here, but just a silent song
     created by the currents that she feels;
with turns and twists, she aptly glides along,
     directed by, whichever one appeals.

She dances to her music wondrously;
     my muse- the soul mate of my poetry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 7/9/2024 4:21:00 AM
'silent song' amazing poem dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/8/2024 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your multiple winner. Way to go. I can understand it completely. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/6/2024 9:23:00 PM
"My muse the soul mate of poetry..." great line. I see you have won multiple times with this poem and that is because you have done a great job with it. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 3/4/2018 9:00:00 PM
Hi Sandra, congratulations on your win in the contest, it is much appreciated. This is such a wonderful write, it sings into my soul, the words painting such vivid images in my mind. I expected to find an excellent write and that is what i found. This one goes into my faves Sandra. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:47:00 PM
Thank you once again, Mike, for faving another of my poems. I am delighted that you enjoyed reading it! Thanks again, friend. Sandra :)
Date: 3/4/2018 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win wth a beautiful sonnet.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/3/2018 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery ...
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:31:00 PM
Oh, I remember this one.. :) Your sonnet showcases your poetic talents perfectly Sandra. Such a gorgeous write expressed in superb rhythm and rhymes and beautiful imagery.. I adore your stunning closing couplet as well. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes and hugs my friend.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you again, Susan, for your lovely visit and such positive comments and congrats! I am very honored that you enjoyed my poem! Hugs and blessings to you. Sandra
Date: 3/3/2018 1:27:00 PM
Nicely done. Congrats.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Curtis! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 3/3/2018 11:06:00 AM
Gorgeously written. Congrats.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dale, for your visit and lovely comment. Sandra :)
Date: 3/3/2018 10:28:00 AM
This poem is a beauty.....and all the contest wins you have received, are proof of what lovely writing can do for the soul ! Congrats to you once again, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carrie, for your very uplifting comments and congrats! I appreciate your visits and support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/3/2018 9:45:00 AM
I am never surprised to see your name sweet Sandra :) You write so beautifully with such ease. Gracefully you conquer...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/6/2018 6:41:00 PM
I am so happy you liked my Sonnet, Laura. Thank you for the nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/27/2017 1:13:00 PM
Congrats Sandra, a lovely poem :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra. A great Sonnet.
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Date: 9/26/2017 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra with your first place win with this lovely poem! :)
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Date: 9/26/2017 12:54:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win with this outstanding sonnet!
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Date: 9/26/2017 9:54:00 AM
Lovely rhythm to your sonnet Sandra, congratulations...
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Date: 9/26/2017 8:01:00 AM
Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 9/26/2017 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra, I remember this one was beautiful then and now.... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/26/2017 7:56:00 AM
I LOVE THIS SONNET AND ITS DEPTH, BEAUTY AND FLOW. Your closing verse golden and so evident of a true poetic heart that sees life through poetic eyes and clear mind. Congrats on your fine win my friend. I LOVE TO SEE SONNETS BEING WRITTEN FOR CONTESTS. Even tho', this time I did not write one myself.
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Date: 9/26/2017 7:12:00 AM
An amazing sonnet Sandra, lovely last two lines, that sum it up.. As always your do this form very well, the rhyme is good as is the flow.. Congratulations on first place in the contest..
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:42:00 AM
This is breathtakingly beautiful!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/27/2016 4:48:00 PM
Alona, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/21/2016 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Many congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/21/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Elaine! Hugs, sandra
Date: 11/21/2016 8:06:00 AM
A 7 for your beautiful WINNING poem, Sandra. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who has found obvious errors on that site! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/21/2016 7:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for your nice comment and the 7! Yes...none of these sites are perfect! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/21/2016 7:40:00 AM
Congrats, Sandra! I feel like I'm dancing along!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/21/2016 7:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/24/2016 3:01:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win! I read this and thought of my granddaughter just in her own little world especially now that big brother is gone to college and now the only child at home. :) Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for another fine contest and my placement! Hope your little granddaughter enjoys her undivided attention! Hugs, Sandra
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