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The Dance of Come and Go

The dance of come and go that is what I call it when people visit my life then exit it Sometimes they come and leave their mark while others, stay awhile giving fortitude and grace; Those are the ones I keep in comrade with Then there is you my love you never left my side through thick and thin you stayed The dance of come and go, that is what I call it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/28/2018 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations, great write. May your dance card always be interesting.
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Date: 12/16/2018 6:03:00 AM
Beatuiful dance Pixie...
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:41:00 PM
You know, it really is a, "dance of come and go", when you really think about it. Well done.
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:28:00 PM
an endearing work which reminds me that friendship is a constant vow to be around at any cost... grreat job, pixie...huggs
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Date: 12/15/2018 9:43:00 AM
Ah, this is so beautifully written; and so so so so so how it actually works! It is weird, but when you return to a place and see the people, they barely remember you, except the ones who really really do.
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:28:00 AM
Good friends are priceless and you're right many leave their mark. Enjoy the weekend. P.S. Couldn't help notice you are in Turkey, I have an appt in Altinkum. Tom.
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Date: 12/15/2018 6:23:00 AM
This is how it can happen. Very well expressed. Love the gratitude shown too :)
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Date: 12/15/2018 5:39:00 AM
aww Pixie it is so wonderful when people are there for you through good and bad times, I am blessed to have an amazing friend called Chris, without her support when my hubby had cancer I doubt I would have got through (I had no support from my parents or my sister my dad wouldn't let me tell my mum in fact she didn't know about hubbies illness until after dad died) :-( hugs Jan xx
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