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The Dance

In a world where hearts open and doves fly out I'll ask " Take my hand and dance with me forever" Motion creates motion, always fluid, sensual Floating in realms of space as a feather Spinning faster and faster as time becomes minuscule And passion the connecting thread that weaves the dance As we cross the floor of time in rhyme For the contest Mood Music with Original Details Sponsored by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 2/26/2014 9:30:00 PM
Frederic, thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/26/2014 9:46:00 PM
Skat, thank you it means a lot when others read my poetry..and thank you for your kindness
Date: 2/24/2014 3:58:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness Dr Ram
Date: 2/24/2014 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Frederick--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your specificity and mood. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2014 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Sheri for the contest I enjoyed doing it, and thank you for your kindness
Date: 1/19/2014 2:31:00 AM
What a beautiful entry this is Frederic. I am sure to see it at the top.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/19/2014 11:06:00 AM
thank you Connie for reading and the kindness of your words
Date: 1/18/2014 7:10:00 PM
wow, you got right on that topic of the new contest quickly and you came up with a really sweet rhythmic poem. I like how romantic it is.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/18/2014 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, it's different for me as sonnets are what I tend to write....I'm glad you felt the romance in this piece

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