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The Dance

The leaves are dancing Like a thousand butterfly wings. The wind is master.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/9/2015 9:21:00 PM
Definitely a 7 from me. This is a beautifully penned Haiku. Very much enjoyed. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 4/20/2014 8:24:00 PM
Wow beautiful) You have posted so much on here and i am really looking forward to reading, and the best place to start is the begining and a beautiful begining it is! I feel like dancing with them leaves :-)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/20/2014 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much. I was so surprised to see that pop up.. I think it was one of the first poems I ever wrote.
Date: 6/24/2010 6:48:00 AM
Though terse and somewhat like a haiku or senryu poem, this fine write is very expressive, Barbara, in it's 5-8-5 format. It leaves the reader thinking! Carl.
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Date: 10/16/2009 4:31:00 AM
Nicely done Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2009 10:21:00 AM
lovely imagery feels very asian! Light & Love
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:13:00 PM
BG, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2009 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2009 6:33:00 PM
Dear Barbara My Barbeeg, Congratulations on making it through the first round in the POETRYSOUP Contest Good LUCK ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/3/2009 4:51:00 PM
Just wanted to add congratulations on having this poem chosen as a semi-finalist to my other comments. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:21:00 AM
Congrats Barbara on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:06:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the PS contest.Best wishes for the next round BG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/29/2009 4:37:00 AM
A second feature for this poem! Congratulations! See my other two comments. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:17:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:16:00 AM
Congratualtions Barbara on your haiku "The Dance" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:00:00 AM
A good March haiku, Barb, visual and sensory. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/26/2009 5:25:00 AM
Excellent imagery. I can almost picture the leaves swirling around me, submitting to the wind. Beautiful writing. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Two in the same week, yet another sign that you are a truly gifted writer. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write! Kirstie
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2009 1:34:00 PM
Wow you have two poem featured Congratulations to you Barbara!! Love Laura :)
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:48:00 AM
Another jewel, Barbara! ~Congratulations on the featured work! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week BG a double whammy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/22/2009 5:48:00 PM
Barbara, it just is that GREAT! Congratulations once again on your amazingly excellent haiku being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/5/2009 5:55:00 PM
Barbara - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 1:25:00 PM
Hi Barbara, this is so beautiful and inspiring, I love the image you painted for us here. The last line "The wind is master" gives me chills. Excellent! :) Congrats on getting featured! Love, Amy
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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