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The Cut

I almost learned to forget you; your hands, like ghosts landing upon the landscape of my body. Your kisses, like bombs that when thrown were flung directly in between my thighs. Your words, like hope, Like home. I was learning to store it away, like learning to ignore the wind. But I opened up a vein again. I thought I'd find you there. And what I found were memories, like mistakes, like scars that just refuse to fade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2014 8:41:00 AM
thank you for the sweet reply
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Date: 8/17/2014 8:22:00 AM
Welcome to mix!! Love this heartfelt write. Love is often a cut that bleeds but sometimes it is a sweet embraces that soothes hurts, cures much of life's ills and rebirths joys by the bucketful.
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Date: 8/17/2014 8:56:00 AM
Robert, thank you for the welcome. Yes, love cuts deeply. Sometimes I let the wound heal and then cut it open to remember again... It's a never ending cycle, it seems.
Date: 8/14/2014 6:53:00 PM
Felicia,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Feli Elizab
Date: 8/17/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thank you!

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