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The winds sigh to the evenings soul of darkness, and night comes trailing a gown of black velvet; inky i n k y black mysterious and moonless, is the endless canopy. Within this deathlike silence, a nightingale calls; and somewhere an owl hoots, hoot hoot h o o t HOOTS . . . Such a lucid silence, and peace; a time for prayer and for weeping. The spirit of sleep comes to me creep c r e e p i n g, s l o w l y my weary eyes close; and I pull the curtain of . . . sleep. _______________________________ June 13, 2016 (Edited July 30, 2018) Poetry/Verse/"The Curtain of Sleep Copyright Protected, ID 1021-076-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to, End of July 2018 Standard Contest, Sponsor Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 8/5/2018 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win--love the imagery!
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Date: 8/2/2018 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. :)
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Date: 8/2/2018 4:16:00 PM
Well expressed. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/2/2018 4:09:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of sleep pulling us into its depth, Constance. Congratulations on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/2/2018 9:00:00 AM
A lovely hypnotic pace. Lovely penning, Dear Heart. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/11/2018 8:11:00 AM
Oooh this is good! Very dark and mysterious and yet peaceful at the end. This is a fave for me.
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Date: 5/10/2018 9:47:00 AM
A most unusual poem, and I loved the mysterious implication of it BW, I thoroughly enjoyed the rhythm....Maria .
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Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2018 11:28:00 AM
Maria thank you for the compliment
Date: 5/10/2018 9:27:00 AM
Beautifully written! I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 5/10/2018 11:28:00 AM
Heidi thank you for the beautiful

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