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''The Curtain of Sleep''

The winds sigh to the evenings soul of darkness,
and night comes trailing a gown of black velvet;
  inky  i n k y  black mysterious and moonless,
      is the endless canopy.
       Within this deathlike silence,
       a nightingale calls;
            and somewhere     an owl hoots,
                           hoot  hoot  h o o t  HOOTS . . .
        Such a lucid silence,
            and peace;
a time for prayer and for weeping.
The spirit of sleep comes to me creep   c r e e p i n g,
   s l o w l y  my weary eyes close;
                          and I pull the curtain of . . .  sleep.

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June 13, 2016 (Edited July 30, 2018)


Poetry/Verse/"The Curtain of Sleep
Copyright Protected, ID 1021-076-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to, End of July 2018 Standard Contest,
Sponsor Brian Strand 

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

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Carber Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Congrats on your win--love the imagery!
Gentry Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. :)
Otieng Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Well expressed. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Wonderful imagery of sleep pulling us into its depth, Constance. Congratulations on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:00 AM
A lovely hypnotic pace. Lovely penning, Dear Heart. Congrats on your top win.
Swartz Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Oooh this is good! Very dark and mysterious and yet peaceful at the end. This is a fave for me.
Williams Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:47 AM
A most unusual poem, and I loved the mysterious implication of it BW, I thoroughly enjoyed the rhythm....Maria .
La France Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Maria thank you for the compliment
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Beautifully written! I enjoyed this :)
La France Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Heidi thank you for the beautiful
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