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The Cry of the Cross Premiere Contest Winner

The land was cloaked in a black dress, The crowd was watching my Christ die, When the blinding darkness, the deafening stillness Was shattered by an overwhelming cry; Resonating, reaching up to heaven across- A cry in anguishful agony, My Saviour crying on the cruel cross- "Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani?" A cry so terribly travailing, Rose from the Man on Calvary, As it did that day, it's still echoing, His pain for us on the cursed tree; A cry so awful, alarming and sore, Was never heard throughout history, 'Twas a loneliness never felt before, A never to be understood mystery; A cry so drastic, disturbing and glum, Reflected His melancholic dismay- So great, none can ever fathom, His Father in Heaven had looked away. ____________ The cry in the cradle was forgotten, When the cry of the cross I heard, A cry that showed He was smitten, First by God, then man, lingered; That crushing cry broke my heart, As I visualised Him God-forsaken, Only to give me a joyous start, True eternal life- of which I've partaken. That cry has made me happy today, The cry of my Saviour on the cross, I can shout and sing, I can praise and pray, I can confidently cry that He's my boss. ____________ What did you, since hearing that cry? A cry cried to make you smile; Did you cry along? or plain deny That that cry could make your life worthwhile? A mute spectator, did you stand beholding? Or wagging your heads, you passed Him by? Or did you hark, halt and with your hands folding, Realise His Sonship and glorify? Did you consider what cost Christ paid? Can you imagine His speechless suffering? Sinless, for us, He was sin made, Gave Himself as a voluntary offering. ____________ When the Son of God cried aloud, His Father would not hear; 'Twas so, we could become His proud Sons and daughters dear; The cast-off cry was not the end though, All was yet not finished nor done, For my Jesus cried again, you know, From God's wrath, to save everyone; The hours of darkness had passed away, The Son addressed His Father above, He was reconciled the very same day, And so were we, just accept that Love; Willingly, for us, He was sacrificed, That we could be bought by His blood; For all our sins, His death sufficed, For us, He rose again from the dead; With eyes of faith, look at Him now, Who bled to death for you and me, With faith-filled ears, listen to how He cried and died, to set us free. ____________ July 12th, 2015

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Date: 12/9/2023 4:49:00 PM
So expansive are the grace granted by the acceptance of Jesus Christ whose spilt blood redeemed the world, should we choose the burdenless love of the son of God. An awesome initiation piece. You capture well the imagery and methophorical span of time blend well. I rejoice.
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:30:00 AM
Stunning and powerful write Jo. :)
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Date: 8/23/2021 1:45:00 PM
A poem that certainly conveys a clear and profound statement of God's justice, mercy and salvation.
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Date: 10/3/2020 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 10/3/2020 2:58:00 PM
Would that I could have my pastor mom by my side now, Jo, she will beautifully amplify your words most tenderly indeed, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 10/28/2017 6:41:00 PM
A beautiful, powerful and outstanding write Jo. Spiritual, dramatic and captivating, I completely enjoyed your artistry in this award winning piece. A well deserved belated congrats Jo!
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:46:00 AM
The Cross has always astounded me. For every sin of every saved person to be placed on one man. So much, that The Father looked away. I like the impact you delivered with this poem.
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:36:00 AM
Fine poetry to read this Saturday. One can easily see why it's been recognised, many congratulations, James :)
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Date: 1/25/2017 5:05:00 AM
Greetings Jo. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/23/2017 1:21:00 PM
Amen. Congratulations Jo. So powerful a poem.
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:24:00 AM
So beautifully written and very powerful, Jo. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2017 5:51:00 PM
Fabulous write, Jo, congratulations on this inspirational beauty..
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Date: 1/22/2017 4:46:00 PM
oh Jo...you knew I would LOVE this one! Beautifully expressed and I am so delighted to see your name next to this piece of art. I knew it had to be you! Only you could speak of the Lord with such reverence and respect with honor and grace. Congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 1/23/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Laura:) all glory be to God alone:) I've always felt that this one is my best poem so far, and I'm so thrilled that you feel the same:) thank you:)
Date: 7/4/2016 2:52:00 PM
My favorite cry from the cross is "It is finished!" Great write, Jo! Congrats!
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Date: 7/2/2016 2:52:00 PM
Jo, thank you for this meditation on the cries of Christ on the cross... very powerful. The 3rd section is a good challenge to all who observe the cross. I appreciated your rhymes; especially agony/sabachthani, suffering/offering, and sacrificed/sufficed. I especially love the arc you take from deep suffering towards redemption; like so many of the Psalms. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 4/18/2016 3:32:00 PM
Very nicely done with power to vibrate throughout eternity. You brought out the message very clearly. As for my poem I was kind of depressed at the time I wrote it. Sometimes I am really unsure of is it just me thinking I am doing what God desires. People say that what I am writing touches their heart but am I really worthy of it or are they just pulling my leg(you know what I mean. I keep working at it it just seems like I can't quit.
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 4/20/2016 10:26:00 AM
Writing is cathartic for me. I feel that one should use God given talent for God's glory :) other people like or not doesn't matter as long as we are doing what God tells us to ... So don't give much thought to what others say. Just continue doing what you are best at:)
Date: 3/9/2016 9:35:00 PM
This poem is so beautiful and it made me teary-eyed. It's beautiful not only in form but in content. For it is by grace we have been saved through faith in Christ. We who were God's enemies are now His friends. This was made possible through the atoning death of Christ. Good to ponder over this during this Season of Lent.
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 3/11/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Joanne:) I'm happy that you like it:) all glory to God:) I 'm just His humble pen:)
Date: 3/9/2016 10:05:00 AM
This is outstanding an so great.....it visited aLl the spots of christ reason for coming into this world. It was worth it J.daniel....I lean what manner of love hath a man that he lay down his life for us. Keep the fire burning....great poetic justice!
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 3/11/2016 6:03:00 AM
Thank you for taking time:) and your valuable views:)
Date: 2/5/2016 5:45:00 AM
The meaning of Good Friday and Easter well put Jo! love this and thanks for visiting my poem "Speak no Evil".
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 2/5/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Grace:) all glory goes to God alone

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