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The Crumb Contest

The Grand Old Dame sat at the table with cream on the corner of her mouth from a donut she ate as she sat in her chair and a coffee she held in her shaking hand A ribbon and pink visor donned her head and a reddish hue sprinkled with white was the color of her coiffured hair reflecting from a ceiling light from a diner in the urban night At one time she was the elite the meat of notoriety of a certain group of society where decisions were made by a select few Whom the masses never knew that shaped the way the world would turn The hand that shook once kissed by royalty now wizened and palsied picked up a crumb and stared at it as if it were a gem the jewels amassed as she recalled in times of wealth She placed the crumb in her mouth and conjured up tastes when her palate was young the delicate meats, the caviar her suite in Paris her gentleman friends But all is gone now Oh dear, she laments,oh dear then she rises from the table and stands erect befitting her character and leaves the contents on the table and the past behind Ralph Sergi contest: NEW POETS OF SOUP 11/26/2013

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Date: 11/1/2017 8:37:00 PM
Ralph, such and intriguing, interesting and insightful write; picking up on the smallest details and nuances of the Grande Old Dame...'cream on the corner of her mouth' - such an intimate detail, and; 'picked up a crumb and stared at it as if it were a gem' - such a delicate observation.. A powerful yet tender write. Awesome!
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:17:00 PM
Hi Ralph , I wanted to see your first ,,wow so powerful your description getting your self into some else , beautifully done a pleasure to read ::)))
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Date: 5/6/2015 6:34:00 AM
Thanks Debbie: i saw a senior eating in a food court dressed so elegantly that I was inspired to write this poem using artistic license. an Italian hug.
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Date: 5/5/2015 7:33:00 PM
A wonderfully recorded scene, no matter the hieghts we ascend we do all fall down, with a rise there always is a fall. Light & Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 3:49:00 PM
A very interesting and detailed journey of another's life as an observer. So well written and imaged :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, Frank: I like your poetic style and I can relate. I will continue to read your poems
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Date: 11/16/2013 10:12:00 PM
Glory days. A story well told.
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Date: 11/11/2013 10:23:00 AM
Wow! I think this is my favorite! In fact I am adding you to my favorite poets.
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Gail. That was a perfectly worded portrayal of a CASINO participant and good advice as well Ralph S.
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:59:00 AM
Excellent read...I couldn't stop reading this touching story. Very well-written.
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