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The Critic

I am not a man who loves superficially When I eat a poem I peel it skinless with my teeth Bite and suck the juicy pulp Lick the seed white before planting it again I am the lion eating its meat Don't ask me to gloat on dross To secure the favor of popularity Poetry is a sacred gift Upon my altar it is a sacrifice of totality. Melt, melt, melt into it Ice into the ocean blue Light into sky Love into you And let us sip and feast on words together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/9/2010 5:32:00 PM
I read this poem and immediately understand your comments on my poem. Thank you and God bless.
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Date: 11/8/2010 1:21:00 PM
Your love of living always brings a smile to my lips, thank you. Light & Love
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Date: 11/5/2010 11:45:00 PM
wonderfully penned with sensitivity and truth and passion about poetry for sure,truly a piece of your heart and soul,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:02:00 AM
Nice way how you look at the criticism as poetry is a sacred gift and very soft, L'nass
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