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The Cries of Adonis-W

I, Adonis, born out of an incest of father-daughter Semitic god, a hunter and a handsome man A god of vegetation, women’s laments “Adoniscries” Festivals on me in spring, mourning in autumn. Spending six months with favorite Aphrodite, The Goddess of love, beauty and sexual pleasure Born out of the churning and foaming of Severed genitals thrown into the ocean Loved by many of the gods and mortals But luckily I am her most favored one Spending six months with ill favored Persephone Queen of the dead, and the underworld, Pomegranate in hand, the goddess of harvest Father promising her in marriage with his brother Over-aged Goddess seduced me in under-age. I have heard about “the Adonis Complex” The main concern today of one’s body image A modern problem striking men of all age Ye, mortals! On the earth you have our replicas Adonises, Zeuses, Aphrodites and Persephones I’m not a god like Christ, Lord Krishna or Allah. Lead me kindly not to undeserved godliness Plead me not for my polygamy and incest Forbid don’t forget, you masters of words Bid me well with your thoughtful muse. ======================================= First Place Winner in CONTEST :"GLORY 'gods' (MEN ONLY ENTRIES) of Linda-Marie

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Date: 8/12/2010 8:26:00 AM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Glory gods (For Men Only)". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:12:00 AM
I sure learned a lot from this write of yours Dr. Ram! Super congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:15:00 PM
You have displayed your vast knowledge on gods, Dr. Ram and congratulations on your first win on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:31:00 PM
I found the winners and you deserve the top spot...congrats
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Linda for my first placement in your contest. Congratulations to all the winners
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:57:00 PM
A great write~Congrats to you!!!!!!!!~very nice!!!!!~Rick
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Date: 8/6/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram.. u are my first place winner in the GLORY 'gods' contest.. a wonderful expressive write deserving of first place... please soup mail me your mailing address to receive your fifty dollar visa gift card.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. happy weekend...with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 12:27:00 PM
Fine classical allusions in your work. We all face the difficulty of mortality. Keep up the fine work! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/30/2010 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment on my poetry ~ I think this poem is very good and it should do well in the contest ~
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:52:00 PM
I love mythology poetry! Mr. Adonis is a quite a figure, his stories are damn funny, somehow. I still can't picture such arrogance and egonamiatry. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:02:00 PM
well, this is really good , Dr. Ram. I am thinking I want to do Aphrodite. she is certainly the most interesting of the goddesses by far!! Fair Adonis, a great one to write on! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:09:00 PM
Dr. Ram, This is an excellent write. Your imagery is excellent. Your facts are very true. Your poem is a story within a poem. I know you will do well in the contest. Best of luck. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, Shirley
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Date: 7/29/2010 7:01:00 AM
Fabulous write on this god, Dr Ram.. All the best for the contest -- Wilma
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Date: 7/29/2010 3:59:00 AM
Interesting thoughts you have penned about Greek Mythology and Gods..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and my blog...Sara
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:43:00 PM
Fantastic write Dr. Ram, Adonis is one of my favorites-I wish you luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:10:00 PM
Excellent verse! Very interesting read with a strong message. Thanks for sharing.
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