The Creep

It’s come upon me, and I think that it began once I had taken my first leap into adulthood, when the fruit of youth was still so sweet . . . but then began the creep. My teens were finished. Never more would I regain youth’s freshness even though I tried with exercise, cosmetics and diet. It mattered not. My zenith time had died. The magic potion coarsing through the blood of us all - it constantly is dying. That thing -that special zing- that helps us thrive leaks out of us; it’s not worth denying. Hair grays; diseases come and joints may ache. I slather lotions on and tint my hair. Ahead of me, death beckons, and “aging” (the creep) has got me more than halfway there! Sept. 24, 2020 For Writing Challenge - Decay - Poetry Contest of Constance La France
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Maverick Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Definatley not crepe; even for those named Suzette.' The creep of time, it creaks unkindly Cracks appear; laughter lines severe.' Remind me of the end unclear' maybe drear? Oh my.. oh dear.'
Boreham Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Oh dear so creepy-the creep, Great poem Andrea Dietrich, Congratulations Winner !!!
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 5:31 AM
- An inevitable truth, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Oh, Andrea, very depressing write, because I'm older than you. So, I get up every morning and ask myself where did it all go. Do love the 1st stanza. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Mitra Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Wow Andrea....Age sure does creep over us...Congrats dear on your win :)
Ermine Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 2:28 PM
A very special poem, Andrea. Straightforward (undeniable) well worded, poinant. Massive Congratulations on its deserved First Place Win.! I like the zeds with zing and zenith in there too!
La France Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:35 PM
A lyrical epic on decay!! Congratulations on your Top Win, Andrea!!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your win. Oh no, “aging” go away. A fun a true write. enjoy your win..............
Jayasankar Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Good one. 'The Creep'..all of us have to face it, and we will! Congrats on your win Andrea!
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Love this Andrea! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 10:57 AM
That creep has certainly crept up on me. I never expected it, and yet here she is!
Horne Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:38 AM
oh, love where you've gone with this - a sure winner
Brewer Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 1:39 AM
Oh! Don’t remind me, Andrea. It’s not so much the ‘creep’, but ‘already crept!’ But I always claim to be 22 ....(mentally).
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Yes, growing older is not for sissies. I know you are not a sissy but a strong woman so you will make it fine. Thanks for the visits to my page. Reads like a good contender for the contest. SK
Callus Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 12:17 PM
For some it might take quite a bit before they are ready to admit it! Time & age have no mercy. We have to learn to live with change! In short, your meaningful pour poem warns us not to live in denial :) Regards // paul
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September 25, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Oh, so that's what i'm fighting against, my creep, is well on his way of winning the battle, so he thinks. Having read your poetry for the past 10 years, i'm of the opinion your wonderful mind still drives along an amazing pen, and long may it do so...
Leffanta Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 2:05 AM
"To everything there is a season . . . ." i.e., forget about Act III when Act II is playing! Aloha! Rico
Mcintosh Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 7:53 PM
WOW This is such a brilliant write. I love it... so true and such a good one for the theme :) I'm sure it will win and deserves to, too... Love it. God bless you
Wolf Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Not at all what I anticipated from seeing the title -- even better! A real gem as it turns out... My thought: Now everyone can appreciate you for your brilliant mind and vibrant personality! Peace and Serenity, Gershon
Laurie Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 4:30 PM
Hello Andrea … the story of life with all the creeping stages - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Bauer Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:05 PM
you have described this magnificently, andrea! i hate that creep (but i sure recognize it!)...
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