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The Conga Line

The conga line stretches on for miles, With wedding gown leading her groom, Swerving in and out of future trials, Before the newlyweds head to their room. With wedding gown leading her groom, Happily stunning in her pearly crown. Before the newlyweds head to their room, Her groom wears a silly hat, and plays the clown. Happily stunning in her pearly crown, God looks at wedded bliss, from clouds high above. Her groom wears a silly hat and plays the clown, Joined by friends and familial love. God looks at wedded bliss from clouds high above - Swerving in and out of future trials. Joined by friends and familial love, The conga line stretches on for miles. 10/1/2017 Pantoum Form

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Date: 10/2/2017 8:31:00 AM
Hi Kim, This is a well written Pantoum. Good imagery and content. I found it a bit funny as well. Good job:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2017 4:50:00 PM
Glad you found the humor and happiness! Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 10/2/2017 7:27:00 AM
Great imagery in this awesome pantoum poem Kim!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl!
Date: 10/2/2017 4:58:00 AM
Fantastic pantoum. I love writing them, and they're far more difficult than is thought.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Darren! I start with the final stanza and make sure it fits with the first stanza. It is a challenge! Thank you, Darren!
Date: 10/2/2017 12:13:00 AM
Fantastic, Kim,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!

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