The Condor

Marvelous to see
a condor soar
unlike the ghoul
when landed and picking -- 

master of thermals!

dark lord of demise -- 

which makes me more
profoundly consider

his tearing beak, and 
vacant, soulless eyes

imagining now, a higher
purpose, loftier reason
for his seeming casual
glides -- dripping red, making
bleeding sunsets~ exposing
man's many elevated truths

(righteousness we use to
impale one another)

as splatters of bloody lies --

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 1/13/2025 11:44:00 AM
Reminds me of the dementors in Harry Potter. Creepy...soul-sucking. :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/14/2025 10:32:00 AM
Totally agree! :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2025 9:14:00 AM
Yea...dark stuff I know. But a sad reality at times. Thank you, Linda. Have a great writing day my friend! Just an after thought, regarding Harry Potter: it seems great fiction -- HG Wells, etc. -- have in common, social truth and weird possible prophesy.
Date: 1/4/2025 12:44:00 PM
Very true indeed Joe Dimino, i read what i read Here..Different authors varied ideas.' Yet we hear that 'God is one' and i find your output most often flowing quite close to my writes and Thoughts..There are some others some are long Dead 'Rumi is one' yet a muslim..which causes Much contemplation.) Thank you for thiz one '
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/5/2025 5:06:00 AM
Yes, Rumi says some beautiful things. I have read a few of his works. Christian Mysticism I relate to closest, also am very fond of Hindu Mysticism. Thank God we have many inspiring sources from which to gather and read. Greatest of all, The Blessed Bible.
Date: 1/3/2025 7:55:00 AM
- "his tearing beak, and vacant, soulless eyes" ... wow ... powerful truth, Joe :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/3/2025 8:59:00 AM
Hi Anne; we pray for world peace. A New Year has promise. Hugs my friend. Thank you.
Date: 1/3/2025 5:22:00 AM
Spiritual symbolism signifies by the bird condor very well described in this meaningful poem.Thanks for sharing.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/3/2025 9:01:00 AM
Hi Akham; so pleased you enjoyed the read. Thank you my friend. Have a great day!
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