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The Color of October

it's October the air around her is cool like her thoughts these days she looks at the branches, twisted much like her mind they are reaching upward but she is grounded forever in time she heard the clatter of branches smacking against walls and the crash of metal screeching brakes screams of pain and then nothing but silence falls she runs to the window sees the audience stare at her then through her riches to rags gold to nothing her fame is gone the trees below are turning from gold to red the leaves tossed about in a slight wind they spin so graceful as in dance a slow spiral down and she longs to join in she reaches towards them tastes the cool air as she falls down grounded with the leaves the pavement turns red as silence falls in October's air The suicide of Dorothy Hale October 21, 1938 (painting by Frida Kahlo)

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Date: 9/16/2019 12:26:00 AM
Sandra, Wow. What a storied poem and based on real events. I can feel the cool air..laced with your tale of intrigue and romance lost. Too sad the life cut short. RIP Dorothy Hale -Richard
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Date: 9/16/2019 5:23:00 AM
Thank you! I had to go back and read this after seeing your comment. Wrote so long ago I forgot about this poem ... thanks for the visit and kind comment :) hugs
Date: 11/7/2013 11:10:00 PM
Wonderful sense of autumn and feeling in this lovely poem, Sandra, congratulations on your win
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/9/2013 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much :) sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week!
Date: 11/7/2013 8:20:00 PM
As always you impress and move me with your words, congrats.
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard :)sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week!
Date: 11/7/2013 12:24:00 PM
Sandra, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Skat.....hugs :)
Date: 9/26/2013 1:28:00 PM
This poem is hauntingly beautiful, Sandra! I love the descriptiveness and all of the hidden metaphors. You are truly a gifted writer. Amazing work!...Thank you once again for the kind comments!
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Kelly :) sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week!
Date: 8/20/2013 6:34:00 PM
This is amazing... you have a great gift and thank you for sharing. Superb write :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/21/2013 9:14:00 AM
aww Thank you for your sweet comment Karen.... hope you have a great day! Hugs :)
Date: 8/20/2013 12:57:00 PM
Wow this is very intense and deep I enjoyed your poetry If this is for a contest I hope you do well! Kindly Laura :)
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Date: 8/20/2013 3:33:00 PM
thank you so much for your kind comment Laura and it is for a contest so double thank you :)
Date: 8/20/2013 5:16:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!! You killed it excuse the expression considering what your talking about what I mean is thank you for writing this and then sharing it with me I mean with us hahahaha. Excellent poem poet.
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Date: 8/20/2013 3:34:00 PM
wow,,,thanks for the awesome comment Sean, it was a fun write!
Date: 8/19/2013 6:10:00 PM
wow this is powerful, the imagery leads up to double meanings and ties it all together. Very concise.
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:28:00 PM
thank you for your kind reply!
Date: 8/19/2013 12:44:00 PM
- Drama in beautiful autumn colors, well done Sandra. - Thanks for the nice visit on my last poem: "Heaven or Hell" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 1:58:00 PM
thank you so much...is for the painting contest...most the paintings are self portraits of the artist... this one jumped out at me not only because what she painted but the day of the suicide just so happened to be my birthday...

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