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The Color of Love’s Vanishing Point

When an old love of mine withdrew from me, I hadn’t quite noticed it at first. Like a flower pressed between two pages in a book, the fading of his love I now can clearly see. At first, love was a rose deep ruby red. Never could I think that it would end. Bright and beautiful was my love’s attentiveness to me, but little by little, the red rose lost its vivid hue. Love notes stopped appearing from places where he always used to leave them. Our times together slowly had decreased. My attempts to spark romance were less and less reciprocated. The day my love said farewell to me, I opened the book to see the rose I’d hoped would stay passionately red. What met my eyes was gray. Oh, dwindled love that cannot flourish. No matter if I tried to preserve it, dull gray had become its vanishing point. His love for me was then beyond revival.

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Date: 9/15/2024 4:53:00 AM
Hello Andrea, a lovely poem. Have a blessed day.
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Date: 9/9/2024 6:11:00 PM
Dear sweet andrea, this is such an impressive poem! How love fades, youv described them in such a creative a manner! I llve the flower pressed between two pages of a book line! Clever! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes! I cant blve i missed this one
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Date: 9/6/2024 11:52:00 AM
A powerful/wonderful ~ write/ending. Love can hurt. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a fun day as you write away............
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, Paula
Date: 9/5/2024 11:07:00 PM
This is beautiful and I think sometimes one door closes to make the other one open and more accessible. Happy birthday!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:35:00 AM
True!
Date: 9/5/2024 2:57:00 PM
"Loves Survival" is a paucity. The proper dress is ice-skates and blindfolds.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:35:00 AM
Ha!
Date: 9/3/2024 11:24:00 AM
Excellent poem. Nice theme.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:36:00 AM
Thanks, Jay
Date: 9/3/2024 5:44:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Ahh how well inked with the unnoticed decline of affection and connection over time. I think you really show and reflect on the initial intensity of love and the eventual realization of its absence. That Agape love shows us that although it is difficult to preserve love when it begins to fade, we must continue to fight for it. Great Read! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:37:00 AM
Yes. I don't think many are capable of agape love
Date: 9/2/2024 12:06:00 PM
Just what exactly is the "love for a lifetime", AD? Perfect earthly love so fractured and fleeting. One yearns for fantasy completion. :o))
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/2/2024 10:38:00 PM
Yes. Such love could only be a fantasy
Date: 9/2/2024 11:58:00 AM
This is sad. He must be crazy...sorry for those memories...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/2/2024 10:38:00 PM
Just fiction, dear
Date: 9/2/2024 11:13:00 AM
It just wasn't meant to be Andrea, I think many of us on here will have experienced that. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/3/2024 9:53:00 PM
Oh I hate those gremlins
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/3/2024 8:17:00 AM
No worries Andrea, the gremlins are at it again, took me a few clicks to get back here, it was saying error 404?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/2/2024 11:42:00 AM
I tried to put in the other box that this was fiction on my part, but I could not get it to go through!

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