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The Color of Her Eyes

i guess i shouldn't let the color of her eyes wake me in the night but i miss her.  her voice sings to me in the shower i should listen to the rushing water  but i miss her. when i laugh i hear her laugh with me, i shouldn’t but i miss her. i know now love isn't enough.  you can love each other with every centimeter of your make up  but realities will sometimes trump that passion you fight for it, years if you have to you just dance in the soiled water of the flood but sometimes, well like i said, love isn't enough. this isn't a sad story, a feel sorry for me discourse, the moments were real they still live with me she is a part of me us is still in me. i still smile when i think of her, i guess i always will.  but sometimes, in the capture of a moon lit night i also cry.
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Trichet Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Hi Maurice, you are gifted with a mighty pen my friend. Brilliant!
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:19 PM
You should read how you responded to my comment when I first saw this one several months ago.talk about humble!!! You truly deserved this other win as well. congrats, dear armand!!
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:50 AM
Nice one, congrats Maurice ...huggs
Manassian Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:02 AM
Congrats, Maurice. That does it. In my favorite poet folder you go. Man...you touch my soul. I know these feelings so well. You are amazing.
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Maurice Congrats! Love-rajat
Roberts Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Nice one my friend, congratulations....Seren
A   Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:52 PM
Maurice,, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Armand:-) Yet another contest I missed lol:-) Hugs jan
A   Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Maurice, that is a good name for a friend.. Linda
Karim Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Awesome! You show a vulnerability in this poem that most men would be afraid to show.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:01 PM
wow, Maurice, this is AMAZING poetry. I love love love it!! You have captured so intensely the longing for an old love that can never die. Straight to faves
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:35 PM
really? ok, thank you so very much.
Chircop Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 3:58 PM
Ow gee,What a beauty.I savoured every verse,awesome!!And the ending ?Spectacular!!Favouring your poem : )
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM
thank you so very much you humble me.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 3:15 PM
- How ... forgetting words and love ... wish it would not hurt so much - Touching and beautiful poem, Maurice! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM
thank you Anne-Lise.
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Amazing emotional write Maurice -sometimes your love just isn't enough. i especially love the repeating line ... 'but I miss her' and also the final stanza which is so touching (the rest of the poem is great too LOL) hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 1:20 PM
;-) xx
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:53 PM
you now comment trying to anticipate my wisecracks. you're catching on to me.
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