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The Cold Facts of Life

She thought of herself as an impeccable woman So often mistaken for a Goddess between peasant Until the man of her dreams stole her virtue In the cold water on Lake George he weighs her down Too often shadows block our visions When infatuation is mistaken for love; Impeccable and careless! With her life She became the cold facts about love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/13/2012 2:45:00 PM
'so sad Annie, so much emotion written here, but i believe there is someone somewhere for everyone, and yes i know sometimes one needs an awful lot of luck finding that person. the poem speaks volumes to so many and that is sad.......
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/13/2012 3:47:00 PM
love hurt harry
Date: 9/12/2012 11:21:00 AM
Yeah... Sometimes (most times?) life is tough... Terry (nice poem)
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/12/2012 6:42:00 PM
thank you Terry for the feedback on this piece one love annie
Date: 9/12/2012 11:10:00 AM
So sad and unfair life can be for some. Very well written Annie - Have a lovely Wednesday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Annie Lander
Date: 9/12/2012 6:43:00 PM
It's a sad world in which we lived thank you so much for commenting..

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