The Cold Cling of Spring

THE COLD CLING OF SPRING

Pretty petals ferociously fall as Spring releases its fury.
Blooming cherry blossoms in disarray, decry a disaster.

Rosebuds refuse to unfurl like a flummoxed fist of stubbornness.
Like moray eels, the moss morphs into a menacing hue,

as blackened clouds crowd out the signs of light and life.
The wind in winey whisper, wallows and whips up, into meringue swells.

Pathological pines, with nesting nettles, fly through worried windows,
and ornery oaks uncork an unholy battle for the braveheart to lose.

Voracious ivy vines, unwind, wrap up a horrified house like a ghastly gift.
Teeny tiny eyes in buried basements hearken to the howl of the harried storm.

Sheltered shells of confusion, await the arrival of calm and catastrophe.
Flash of a fresh new day, finds friends hugging, holding hands, waxing wings

of action, surveying the skies, the smiling sun, the warmth
of Winter’s waning and Spring’s taming. Yet the cold clings

to the forest of ferns and forget-me-nots, fretting at mocking skies,
mottled in chaotic cataclysmic chokehold like weary wrestlers.

When will this season settle down? Dreary and drowning in snow and rain.
Disdain on bushy brows.  Parasols on parade in perpetual mourning frown.

Still evergreen buds, buddy up to branches, and dot-to-dot blossoms
appear amidst a washed out willow slowly sipping sanguine revelry.

3/27/2018
Silent One’s Alliteration Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:58 PM
An explosion of imagery. Congrats on your fine win, Kim.
S     Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:28 PM
My GOSH Kim!! This is amaaaaazing! There are so many great lines here and wow imagery!! One of my favs ... Voracious ivy vines, unwind, wrap up a horrified house like a ghastly gift. Great stuff!!! Congrats on your well deserved WIN!!!! ~Judy
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thanks, Judy! Hugs...Kim
Lawless Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:35 PM
OH, suffering' succotash .... you wascally wabbit you. congrats on your placement Kim, a really picturesque visual present.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:49 PM
LOL, John! :) Kim
Neumann Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:07 AM
Buds buddying up to branches and dot to dot blossoms indeed when spring is still cold. Great. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Kai!
Gupta Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:59 PM
A beautiful procession of nice alliteration, Kim ... Congratulations on your definitely deserved top notch win ...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Thanks so much, Probir!
George   Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 6:32 PM
A TRULY STUNNING EXPRESSION OF SPRING. MANY CONGRAT'S ON YOUR TOP NOTCH WIN.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Thanks, Elaine! <3 Kim
Ashley Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:40 PM
Spectacular Kim! 'Parasols on parade in perpetual mourning frown.' One of the many outstanding lines that I love.. Vibrant and lustrous imagery is complimented by your awesome alliteration to create this vivid and pleasing poem. Congratulations on your fantastic first place win!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! Hugs...Kim
Talbot Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:11 PM
How eloquent was that, very, I hasten to add. Congratulations Kim, on your 1st place win. Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Thanks so much, Mick!
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:30 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Mandani Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Hey, this is pretty nice. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Thanks, Abdul!
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:39 PM
You really know how to create vivid images with your pen, I love the first line and the poem is full of imaginative lines with light alliteration, which adds to the imagery in this poem.. Congratulations on your first place Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Thanks so much, Silent! <3 Kim
Thomas Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:29 PM
A vivid and beautiful alliteration Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, SOTP! :)
Godwin Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Pretty prose properly penned and posed, prime was my pleasure pursuit in perusing each line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Thanks so much! POETRY <3’s coming your way, sweet lady!
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