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The Cold Cling of Spring

THE COLD CLING OF SPRING Pretty petals ferociously fall as Spring releases its fury. Blooming cherry blossoms in disarray, decry a disaster. Rosebuds refuse to unfurl like a flummoxed fist of stubbornness. Like moray eels, the moss morphs into a menacing hue, as blackened clouds crowd out the signs of light and life. The wind in winey whisper, wallows and whips up, into meringue swells. Pathological pines, with nesting nettles, fly through worried windows, and ornery oaks uncork an unholy battle for the braveheart to lose. Voracious ivy vines, unwind, wrap up a horrified house like a ghastly gift. Teeny tiny eyes in buried basements hearken to the howl of the harried storm. Sheltered shells of confusion, await the arrival of calm and catastrophe. Flash of a fresh new day, finds friends hugging, holding hands, waxing wings of action, surveying the skies, the smiling sun, the warmth of Winter’s waning and Spring’s taming. Yet the cold clings to the forest of ferns and forget-me-nots, fretting at mocking skies, mottled in chaotic cataclysmic chokehold like weary wrestlers. When will this season settle down? Dreary and drowning in snow and rain. Disdain on bushy brows. Parasols on parade in perpetual mourning frown. Still evergreen buds, buddy up to branches, and dot-to-dot blossoms appear amidst a washed out willow slowly sipping sanguine revelry. 3/27/2018 Silent One’s Alliteration Contest

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 2:58:00 PM
An explosion of imagery. Congrats on your fine win, Kim.
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:28:00 PM
My GOSH Kim!! This is amaaaaazing! There are so many great lines here and wow imagery!! One of my favs ... Voracious ivy vines, unwind, wrap up a horrified house like a ghastly gift. Great stuff!!! Congrats on your well deserved WIN!!!! ~Judy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thanks, Judy! Hugs...Kim
Date: 4/2/2018 4:35:00 PM
OH, suffering' succotash .... you wascally wabbit you. congrats on your placement Kim, a really picturesque visual present.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2018 7:49:00 PM
LOL, John! :) Kim
Date: 4/2/2018 4:07:00 AM
Buds buddying up to branches and dot to dot blossoms indeed when spring is still cold. Great. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Kai!
Date: 4/1/2018 8:59:00 PM
A beautiful procession of nice alliteration, Kim ... Congratulations on your definitely deserved top notch win ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Probir!
Date: 4/1/2018 6:32:00 PM
A TRULY STUNNING EXPRESSION OF SPRING. MANY CONGRAT'S ON YOUR TOP NOTCH WIN.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2018 6:34:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine! <3 Kim
Date: 4/1/2018 5:40:00 PM
Spectacular Kim! 'Parasols on parade in perpetual mourning frown.' One of the many outstanding lines that I love.. Vibrant and lustrous imagery is complimented by your awesome alliteration to create this vivid and pleasing poem. Congratulations on your fantastic first place win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! Hugs...Kim
Date: 4/1/2018 5:11:00 PM
How eloquent was that, very, I hasten to add. Congratulations Kim, on your 1st place win. Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2018 5:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mick!
Date: 4/1/2018 3:30:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2018 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 4/1/2018 3:18:00 PM
Hey, this is pretty nice. Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2018 5:35:00 PM
Thanks, Abdul!
Date: 4/1/2018 2:39:00 PM
You really know how to create vivid images with your pen, I love the first line and the poem is full of imaginative lines with light alliteration, which adds to the imagery in this poem.. Congratulations on your first place Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2018 5:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Silent! <3 Kim
Date: 3/30/2018 8:29:00 PM
A vivid and beautiful alliteration Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2018 8:41:00 PM
Thank you, SOTP! :)
Date: 3/29/2018 1:22:00 PM
Pretty prose properly penned and posed, prime was my pleasure pursuit in perusing each line. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/29/2018 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much! POETRY <3’s coming your way, sweet lady!

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