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The Closet Message

A closet with two racks The higher rack holds holds clothes The lower rack has shirts Then the dog walks into the closet Very slowly she is walking str When she gets to the end She turns around starts again Walking very slow-ly, slow-ly by At the other opeing comes out Feeling pleased relaxed After her message is done

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2018 1:33:00 AM

pets can be naughty but they are still loved...i have dachshund and she can really test me at times, lol... such a fun read, darlene..huggs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2018 2:18:00 PM

Hello Nette, yes pets can be naughty at times.Maggie does enjoy her closet message. She does this often. Have a nice day my friend.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 12/13/2018 10:42:00 PM

Really funny! Thank You!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2018 11:18:00 AM

Hello Andrew, I am happy to read you had a good laugh. Have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/13/2018 9:48:00 AM

Our pets are full of amusement as is your poem. Happy Thursday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2018 5:23:00 PM

Hello Mike, yes it does seem that our pets are full of amusement. Why does it have to be at night.? Have a Happy Thursday. xxxxx.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/13/2018 9:48:00 AM

Our pets are full of amusement as is your poem. Happy Thursday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2018 5:26:00 PM

Hello Mike, I was not amused last night when Maggie whined at 4 in the morning, she was let out, then again she whined at 6 in the morning. So we all had lack of sleep. Have a nice happy Thursday. xxxxxx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/13/2018 2:36:00 AM

LOL, made me smile this did!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2018 7:56:00 AM

Hello Arthur,I am so glad this made you smile. Hope all is well with you. have a nice day my friend.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2018 8:53:00 PM

Bad dog! What a cute poem, Darlene. Sorry you had to deal with a mess, but it led to this cute gem, so?? So many things often result from chaos and such. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2018 7:58:00 AM

Hello CayCay,thank you for the lovely comment. No mess the shirts were hanging up. have a nice day my friend.