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The Cloak Worn

Loneliness is the cloak worn on the door by the wooden porch steps that hang like shadows from the house that cried paint flakes drip from the sill of a shattered window like falling tears that come from the weathered whispers of emptiness which has torn its heart out for years the roof has fallen in various places leaving its walls exposed to the wind and rain ravaging its once held beauty of an oak staircase with a hand carved rosette the sun shines now on its mold invested lost days not the once lush garden of ferns boardered by flowers that always bloomed near the stone path once a house of life where the living were held in comfort...now no one is concerned for its care its a garbage dump from those passing by their trash has eaten out its soul over time a sad reminder of the circle of life 7/17/20 contest Decaying House sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 7/27/2020 5:06:00 AM
You've used such picturesque metaphors to compose this sad yet beautiful muse Frederic. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:39:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this wonderful poem, and I love the music too _Constance
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Date: 7/19/2020 4:13:00 PM
so beautiful in its sadness Frederic and i adore the music I have used it with several of my own poems, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2020 1:33:00 PM
This is very creative, Frederic. You give us a sense of compassion for the old house that had once provided comfort to its inhabitants. And the last line is stunning! Best wishes in the contest. It's a winner to me and a fave.
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Date: 7/15/2020 11:43:00 PM
An awesome, beautiful and melancholy verse, which touches the heart and captivates. The video is divine. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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