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The Circle

The Circle... You are the first You are the last You are the birth of every past. You are the light Full of delight With every Dawn, you break the night. You are divine I am the vine Let me be drinking, drinking your wine. I am the Beat You are the treat Together we make a Circle complete. 2/10/2012 “Haloo”

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/23/2023 7:14:00 PM

A delightful poem Pashang."You are he birth of every past." Fabulous. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/21/2018 7:20:00 AM

What a tremendous first piece. Well done.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/21/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thanks...

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/17/2017 6:34:00 PM

Pashang, I wanted to see your first poem here at PS to see how your journey started and I was not disappointed.. this is an intriguing and compelling write. Using the concept of the continuum of a circle and your perception of your place in it is an interesting concept, excellently expressed and enjoyed!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/18/2017 1:25:00 AM

Thanks Susan, you're so wonderful ...

Paul Callus

Date: 3/6/2016 6:38:00 AM

Having a look at your first contribution to Soup, Pashang, and I find myself within this complete circle...a striking poem. ~ regards // paul

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/6/2016 10:09:00 AM

Thanks Paul, you're so kind..

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/4/2016 7:10:00 AM

The very sweet circle of life is also tinged with a bit of sadness. The sweet and the sad complete each other. Very strange world we are in.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/4/2016 9:49:00 AM

Thank you my friend

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/11/2016 3:30:00 PM

Hi Pashang. I have never tried a Ghazal. As a form i don't really know it. As a poem, itdoes tick all my boxes. I always find i am glad to read poets early works for they usually hold such hidden gems as this write is. Let the heart keep singing....Vladislav.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/12/2016 11:42:00 PM

Thank you my friend.

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/30/2015 8:11:00 PM

I love the beat in this treat :-). So, this is a ghazal? I've only read 2 so I'm not really familiar with the form. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Pashang. Thank you for your visit earlier. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. hugs!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/30/2015 8:31:00 PM

Thank you...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2015 5:03:00 PM

Pashang, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/17/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thanks

Skat A

Date: 10/13/2015 12:37:00 PM

Hi Pashang, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/17/2015 1:45:00 PM

I read your mid night feather...Your words have soft flows , you're definitely in love.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2015 5:50:00 AM

- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/17/2015 1:48:00 PM

HI Anne, I read your one way ticket! We are you going? Take me with you....