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The Christmas Visit Dimly lit room with flowered wallpaper, A bride chamber for a couple, 1920. Coal dust between her fingers, a strong back, waiting for the annual Christmas visit. “My husband’s coming to town, on the 4:00 train.'' Scented linens and a stern picture of Jesus Christ New curtains to match the comforter. Grandmother Mother Mother-in-law Church woman Daughter Caregiver Woman in love with one wish Snowflake tryst while Time stands still and is a giving friend tonight. Invalid mother, Rocks and prays. Sits and sighs. 12/9/16 Out of the Box Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 12/9/2016 7:29:00 PM
This is very sincere. Best to you Janis :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 12/10/2016 6:07:00 PM
thanks for stopping by Akkina.

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