The Christmas Play

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Brilliant snowflakes shimmering on the pines Reminding me the Christmas play has come Now, if only I could simply remember my lines Ooops, I forgot… Now the play is just humdrum A Funny Christmas Themed 4 liner Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin December 24, 2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2022 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Oh no, remember my lines. Not toooo funny to forget the lines. Have a blessed day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2022 9:39:00 AM

very nicely done, Regina. I could just imagine forgetting one's lines. Great rhyme with the pines.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/9/2022 8:49:00 AM

Regina, congratulations on your winning placement, a cute one!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/24/2021 11:54:00 AM

Hello Regina, when children are in a school play, they forget their lines because they are nervous. I think that is normal. Merry Christmas. & Happy New Year. Hugs.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/24/2021 10:12:00 AM

O my, yes! The bane of everyone who has ever had to memorize something and recite it before a crowd...or in my case, even in front of a teacher!

Bill Baker

Date: 12/24/2021 8:12:00 AM

Cute poem, but not funny to forget lines, lol Having been in several plays over the years, it's always a nagging fear. Happy holidays Gina. Good luck in the contest, Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/24/2021 3:04:00 AM

Lol every actors nightmare. Good luck Gina and merry Christmas. Tom