The Children

Leave me the hell alone she cries
Inside her aching head
I've had much more than I can take 
Sometimes I feel I'm dead
Oh shepherd don't your flock forsake 
Alone on Calvarys Hill
How much can a body take 
When your mind has had its fill
 
A light so bright and hopeful
A picture perfect birth
A world of wonder, laid before
This seedling of the earth
To nurture's but a wistful dream
A momentary lapse
A father wrapped up in himself
A mom lost in her past
 
Can harm I do while wishing
The Angels gentle hands
Embrace this failing empty shell
This web of empty strands
A love of love itself it seems
Of passion and desire
Turns Sailors into monsters
And Mothers into liars
 
What makes a wonder wonderful
What makes a blessing blessed
'Tis you alone we come to know
When not so self- obsessed
Lord, help us not to lose your light
And wallow in the dirt
And help instead to nurture
All we're given at our birth
 
A wish alone can guide us
If truth is what we seek
Protect the weak and hungry
The burdened and the meek
Lord, make me strong enough to show
The children in my care
Their path is guided by your light
Their Souls are in your care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 11, 2020 at 5:09 PM
This piece come from a heart that is true. I was an Early childhood teacher for almost thirty years and wrote a book called suffer the little children, so can relate to this. There is no excuse for children being left to grow up inside gangs and criminal families when we legislate to take away rights of caring parents. I liked the way you presented this work. Best regards David in NZ
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January 24, 2015 at 7:28 AM
1000 VIEWS THANK YOU ALL...XOXO
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November 3, 2014 at 2:12 PM
powerful piece of writing peter love how you drew this pal touch piece
Walsh Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Thanks Liam....fond of this one ... tells my mom and dads tale thanks for reading
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May 4, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Hello Peter This is only the second poem of yours I am reading and I must say I'm impressed. You are writing beautiful prayers to our living God. I am moved by your words and His spirit that flows through them. I am adding you to my favorite poets list.
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May 31, 2014 at 5:04 AM
Just read your post Richard, thank you for the kind words. pete
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March 22, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Thanks for all the reads you guys and the kind comments...
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January 2, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Hi you guys....new here thank you for the kind comments I will read and reply to your poems as soon as possible For me poetry is a great release glad to be a part of such a wonderful society.....dont know how to reply personally but I'll work things out ...Glad to be here again x
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January 2, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Hi Peter, heartfelt, I'm glad you have the heart many wish they had.. People like you make the world better a better place. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 2, 2014 at 11:10 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Peter !! A very good poem - :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 2, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Peter, epic and deep.... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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