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The Children

Leave me the hell alone she cries Inside her aching head I've had much more than I can take Sometimes I feel I'm dead Oh shepherd don't your flock forsake Alone on Calvarys Hill How much can a body take When your mind has had its fill A light so bright and hopeful A picture perfect birth A world of wonder, laid before This seedling of the earth To nurture's but a wistful dream A momentary lapse A father wrapped up in himself A mom lost in her past Can harm I do while wishing The Angels gentle hands Embrace this failing empty shell This web of empty strands A love of love itself it seems Of passion and desire Turns Sailors into monsters And Mothers into liars What makes a wonder wonderful What makes a blessing blessed 'Tis you alone we come to know When not so self- obsessed Lord, help us not to lose your light And wallow in the dirt And help instead to nurture All we're given at our birth A wish alone can guide us If truth is what we seek Protect the weak and hungry The burdened and the meek Lord, make me strong enough to show The children in my care Their path is guided by your light Their Souls are in your care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/11/2020 5:09:00 PM
This piece come from a heart that is true. I was an Early childhood teacher for almost thirty years and wrote a book called suffer the little children, so can relate to this. There is no excuse for children being left to grow up inside gangs and criminal families when we legislate to take away rights of caring parents. I liked the way you presented this work. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:28:00 AM
1000 VIEWS THANK YOU ALL...XOXO
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Date: 11/3/2014 2:12:00 PM
powerful piece of writing peter love how you drew this pal touch piece
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Peter Walsh
Date: 11/3/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Liam....fond of this one ... tells my mom and dads tale thanks for reading
Date: 5/4/2014 8:39:00 AM
Hello Peter This is only the second poem of yours I am reading and I must say I'm impressed. You are writing beautiful prayers to our living God. I am moved by your words and His spirit that flows through them. I am adding you to my favorite poets list.
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Peter Walsh
Date: 5/31/2014 5:04:00 AM
Just read your post Richard, thank you for the kind words. pete
Date: 3/22/2014 2:30:00 PM
Thanks for all the reads you guys and the kind comments...
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Date: 1/2/2014 6:29:00 PM
Hi you guys....new here thank you for the kind comments I will read and reply to your poems as soon as possible For me poetry is a great release glad to be a part of such a wonderful society.....dont know how to reply personally but I'll work things out ...Glad to be here again x
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Date: 1/2/2014 11:23:00 AM
Hi Peter, heartfelt, I'm glad you have the heart many wish they had.. People like you make the world better a better place. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/2/2014 11:10:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Peter !! A very good poem - :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:43:00 AM
Peter, epic and deep.... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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