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Written 13th May 2025
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Waddle with me in this downpour of rain Singing in a symphonious refrain Jumping in puddles, splashing everyone Simply because we will have lots of fun. We fluff our feathers, inhale a deep breath Twist and shake until we have no breath left Because we’re chicks we run a mighty dash And easily can do a chicken splash. One two and then quack, one two and then splash Allow alluring eyelashes to flash Look to the left and then look to the right Dancing and splashing from morning to night. Then we can dream vibrant chicken splash dreams In the wondrous world of fantasy themes When we splash there, surely chicks can't do wrong Quacking to the tune of chicken splash song.

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Date: 5/22/2025 1:48:00 AM
How I wish I can rhyme like you. A lovely poem, great flow. Best of luck.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/22/2025 11:21:00 AM
Dear Victor , your poems are outstanding just the way they are, something you should be very proud of. Thank you very much, Beryl
Date: 5/20/2025 10:48:00 PM
This is so lovely. It has a vibrancy and a lovely flow. Very musical too. All the Best dear Beryl.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/22/2025 11:19:00 AM
Thank you dearest Valso, your words mean a lot… Beryl
Date: 5/16/2025 1:00:00 PM
Love that 3rd verse…get your chicken on…cheep cheep!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/16/2025 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Kim, love that you loved the third verse… Beryl
Date: 5/14/2025 9:50:00 AM
LOL this is verrry cute
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/16/2025 1:32:00 AM
Thank you Paige, appreciated… Beryl
Date: 5/13/2025 7:35:00 PM
So cute and fun!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/13/2025 7:41:00 PM
Thank you David, I’m pleased to read that you thought this poem cute fun… Beryl
Date: 5/13/2025 7:23:00 PM
Dear beryl! How beautiful is your poem! Reminds me of rainy days when me and my sister sometimes just let lose , and dance in the rain! I love how elegantly youv woven words here and the flow of your lines and as always your rhymes are brilliant and sublime! I especially love the last stanza, how youv turned the prompt theme into poetry! I wouldnt have thought of ending it on that note! So clever and creative! Best wishes! Sending you light always!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/13/2025 7:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Ink for your wonderful review of this poem. I remember when hubby and me were young newly weds and we got caught in a heavy downpour, we ran like never before, got soaked to the skin but laughed and laughed, one of those moments one never forgets. All the best to you with light too… Beryl

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