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The Charcoal Sketch

A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes;
 Stygian grey reflected lies,
Desolate haunts that drift from where
  the graphite raven sets her stare;
Trembling pleas her god denies,
  A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes,
Feels embers dim to chalky coal
  and onyx smolder through her soul;
Her screams are muffled by her lips
  so tightly sewn by fingertips,
A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes,
  reduced to tears of silent cries;
She prays for light as darkness draws,
  once more gets groped  by  daddy’s claws;
 So now in skies as raven flies,
        A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Very deep and dark...Is it for any contest?
Garcia Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:09 AM
It was for a blank prompt that simply said "what is depression?" - I saw the picture online and thought it was perfect for tons of things. Thank you for reading!
Kent Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Very nice write.
Gupta Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Lovely Quatern ... The refrain itself sounds a nice monoku ...
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