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The Changing Sky - Contest

Stand still, look to the skies every second the pattern changes, watch the clouds sail past being blown by the winds of time. Colours change, from the dark  cloudless sky with stars atwinkling, to a sky of clouds, wind making leaves tumble and fall to the ground. Morning breaks with a sky of red and orangy hues, lighting up a warning to one and all, dark rain clouds will soon be here to dampen the ardour of any love bird. Blue skies are shouting come outside I am warm to your skin, will rejuvenate your soul, I am life to all, come its fun to play , to run in the sun ,  until it sets, back, into its fiery hues. Now close your eyes you will have visions to hold in your minds eye memories to savour all your life. The ever changing sky. penned June 24 2013

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Date: 7/25/2013 4:28:00 PM
Congrats on your very descriptive winning work..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/26/2013 12:32:00 AM
Thank you Sara ....Seren
Date: 7/24/2013 1:51:00 PM
SEREN, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:55:00 AM
Thank you SKAT ...Seren
Date: 7/23/2013 8:13:00 PM
So very lovely..congrats..BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/25/2013 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Barbara ..Seren
Date: 7/23/2013 5:02:00 PM
Impressive! Congratulations!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/25/2013 12:57:00 AM
Thank you Isaiah .....Seren
Date: 7/23/2013 2:59:00 PM
Seren congratulations on your fantastic win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:58:00 AM
Hi Connie,many thanks ..Seren
Date: 6/26/2013 10:30:00 AM
Love the ever changing skies. Nicely described in your poem. love phyl
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Phyllis ....Seren
Date: 6/25/2013 7:53:00 AM
Well done you should do well with this gem.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/25/2013 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Richard...Seren
Date: 6/25/2013 5:52:00 AM
well described you have captured the spirit of sky in this gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/25/2013 1:39:00 PM
Thanks Shadow or your kind words ...Seren
Date: 6/25/2013 5:35:00 AM
This is is perfect rendition of an ever changing sky my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a delightful piece, an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/25/2013 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Russell ...Seren

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