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The Chair In Icu

I've been watching you for hours now, wringing your hands pacing the floor watching the monitors holding his hand never leaving his side Your spirit is strong, he feels you by his side knows you are there, hears your whispered prayers yet you are oh, so tired, I see it in your weary face, your bloodshot eyes I'm here for you, when you are ready- pull me close to his bed, lean back and take his hand, close your eyes for a few minutes. I'll stand watch with you, I'm here for you, and I'm not aganist catching a tear or two I see you looking at me-longing for relief He won't think you weak if you sit down for a while--so, Go ahead-- Pull me close to the bed, take his hand, lean back, close your eyes, rest. I am here for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 5:17:00 PM
I remember this heartfelt, beautifully written piece, Trudy. Again, congratulations on your double success in the first round and good luck in the finals with your winning poetry! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/28/2009 4:29:00 PM
Just wanted to stop by and add--Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:36:00 PM
Trudy, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James,x
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, Trudy>>James
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Date: 9/2/2009 4:45:00 PM
Been there done that several times. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 7:34:00 AM
Congrats on this touching piece being chosen, Love, daver
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Date: 9/2/2009 7:08:00 AM
The constant change in the use of pronouns makes it magical @.@ seems like you're talking about several persons yet you know they are one @.@ thanks for the experience =D
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations, Trudy, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Committment and love, somehow, eases the discomfort of hard old chairs as one's loved one clings to life each new moment. The is Very well written. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/31/2009 11:49:00 PM
Trudy, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:15:00 PM
What an uplifting and committed view on what it means to care. Like the artistic presentation. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 7:23:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. thanks for always commenting on my works...You are great Trudy! Adeleke
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Trudy. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:07:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Trudy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/30/2009 6:56:00 PM
Such deep feelings in this touching poem. Congratulations on this featured work this week! well deserving!~ Carrie
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:10:00 PM
this is such a beautiful and sad poem. just too many lines that have such fluid and imagery. well done! -Jason
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:55:00 PM
heart felt. i just wrote a piece looking for this type of person. though the world won't understand. this is what we're looking for the chair in the ICU. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 4/5/2009 3:11:00 PM
Trudy, I have so must joy to read your poems, particularly the stucture and imagery of this one is enticingly seductive, you your reader an existential presence in them. And as for kind read of my poems and your comments, I am humbled to accept them. Love
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:13:00 PM
You're pretty amazing yourself! The structure of this piece and the repetitions you employ are very effective... full of strong emotion, tender and sublime... BRAVO you!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:35:00 PM
so strong my friend,thanks for this poem i just needed it right now-love charma
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:24:00 PM
Quite touching, Trudy. Your style is great, puts the reader right in the sick room. Good to hear from you. Love, daver
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:36:00 PM
As a former ICU nurse, I can attest to the truth of your words. Wonderful perspective in this poem. It's so hard on loved ones to keep going day after day especially when the one that's ill is unstable and needs to stay in an ICU setting for awhile. Good job! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:33:00 AM
Nice work Trudy..Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/26/2009 12:58:00 AM
I felt this! Truly great... amazing write. -Amaan
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Date: 3/22/2009 11:26:00 AM
ENTER THE SUMMER CONTEST BABY! This is so rhythmic and touching. A poem that is both Loving and relatable, with a flow that outdoes most poems...Excellent job here darling, you have an honorable mention by me!!! Sorry ya missed the contest, but they weren't ready for you yet....now you have to enter it! Really ....Lovely work friend! Always your friend at the soupie....Janers
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