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The Carnival

Carnival! Color fills my head Excitement Dance all night In awe of the dragon masks Breath the atmosphere Carnival! The lively rhythm The laughter More dancing Such beautiful creations I wish I was there By Emma Buckeridge For contest : Share a Shadorma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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John Freeman
Date: 8/23/2011 10:39:00 PM
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Congratulations Emma on a worthy present for the contest. Agape, Moses
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/23/2011 9:58:00 PM
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This is nice, longing for that lively carnival. Congrats on your win.
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Kash Poet
Date: 8/23/2011 2:14:00 PM
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Congrats Emma on your win....beautiful write here.
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Jack Horne
Date: 8/23/2011 12:23:00 PM
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I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
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Caryl Ramsdale
Date: 8/23/2011 12:12:00 PM
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Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. Caryl Ramsdale
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/23/2011 10:14:00 AM
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Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 8/23/2011 9:29:00 AM
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Congrats Emma on your wonderful win with these elegant lines on carnival luv..enjoy..
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/23/2011 9:18:00 AM
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Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Emma
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David Williams
Date: 8/23/2011 4:12:00 AM
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hey Emma, congrats on your win, wish i was there as well ...David
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David Williams
Date: 8/19/2011 4:36:00 PM
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hey Emma lets party....... good luck, David
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Theresa T
Date: 8/19/2011 8:07:00 AM
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I like the line "breath the atmosphere" Carnivals do have their own atmosphere, don't they? Great!
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Darren Garmer
Date: 8/19/2011 6:12:00 AM
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I wish I was there also :)
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Kash Poet
Date: 8/19/2011 5:23:00 AM
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Very nice poem on the theme of carnival Emma...liked it.Best wishes.
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