Emma Buckeridge Poet Shadorma

The Carnival

Carnival!
Color fills my head
Excitement
Dance all night
In awe of the dragon masks
Breath the atmosphere

Carnival!
The lively rhythm 
The laughter
More dancing
Such beautiful creations
I wish I was there




By Emma Buckeridge
For contest : Share a Shadorma

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John Freeman August 23, 2011 at 10:39 PM Congratulations Emma on a worthy present for the contest. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2011 at 9:58 PM This is nice, longing for that lively carnival. Congrats on your win.

Kash Poet August 23, 2011 at 2:14 PM Congrats Emma on your win....beautiful write here.

Jack Horne August 23, 2011 at 12:23 PM I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Caryl Ramsdale August 23, 2011 at 12:12 PM Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. Caryl Ramsdale

Carol Sunshine Brown August 23, 2011 at 10:14 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congrats Emma on your wonderful win with these elegant lines on carnival luv..enjoy..

Dr.Ram Mehta August 23, 2011 at 9:18 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Emma

David Williams August 23, 2011 at 4:12 AM hey Emma, congrats on your win, wish i was there as well ...David

David Williams August 19, 2011 at 4:36 PM hey Emma lets party....... good luck, David

Theresa T August 19, 2011 at 8:07 AM I like the line "breath the atmosphere" Carnivals do have their own atmosphere, don't they? Great!

Darren Garmer August 19, 2011 at 6:12 AM I wish I was there also :)

Kash Poet August 19, 2011 at 5:23 AM Very nice poem on the theme of carnival Emma...liked it.Best wishes.