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The Carnival

The biggest tent reverberated, a geriatric battleground; high stakes - two bits a card, hardened veterans played 4. Calls echoed through the thick air where baritone pitchmen sang to an orchestra of fairground pipes. The carousel spun in dizzy reality smiles, cheers, BINGO! - frowns. A couple of "marks" strolled by - unknowing fodder for the next grafter. I escaped to the safety of the dart tent where dull darts glanced off underinflated balloons and cupies and teddys sat staring - a loving child three lucky shots away This, when phones were home leashed to the wall and families still ... hung out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/16/2017 5:37:00 PM
I only got to go to a couple, My dad would have tore me up if he had found out. Thieves and gypsies feasting on innocence. If you did get lucky enough to win, they would always give you the ugliest toy and most useless toy they had. Cool poem, Craig:)
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Craig Cornish
Date: 6/17/2017 12:59:00 PM
Back when Daniel, Dad and Mom would take us often and the one we went to most I would actually work a tent, usually the baseball pitch. Funny, but I've only been to a couple since I was a kid---thanks Bud

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