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The Caringest Place

Oh joy, oh happiness, I'm off to my second home No other place like it, 'cept the bathroom, my throne Yup it's the doctor's office In case, got a clean orifice Such a special place, the caringest, ever known

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/27/2017 8:51:00 AM

The day cannot start till a visit's been made//Without a movement the day's in the shade//regular as rain//or else a damn pain//just a few tricks of the trade. MOVE ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/27/2017 10:08:00 AM

I'm A-MOVEMENT on!!!Just a regular old guy!!!

Silent One

Date: 9/27/2017 6:52:00 AM

Bittersweet I guess, but something that happens to all of us..

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/27/2017 7:09:00 AM

Until I reached 80, never visited a doctor and I mean NEVER! Now I'm on 5 pills a day! My DaDa must be turning over in his grave! He was a health nut and anti-doctors but still died of cancer at 67!!! NO RULES!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2017 6:16:00 AM

That is such a great word, caringest, where did you ever come up with such a word? Ha! Ah yes, the bathroom, such a wonderful place! We men love that place within our own home, outside the home not so much! This is such a grandiose poem my friend! I enjoyed this lovely piece this morning! Such a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/27/2017 6:21:00 AM

So you don't like going pee pee in public then??? ME TOO!!!