The Caress of Words

When I read a poem that breathes, 
pulsing wildly, alive with its own heartbeat,
relentless, compelling in its desire,
I feel touched as if by another, feeling
some unseen hand brushing my hair,
lips light as air licking the flesh near
my own sojourning heart....

And I return the caress as my hand 
glides ever questing o'er the soft and
solid paper, my eyes rolling over the
printed pages like a hawk seeking prey,
looking with the desire of the wild
at the naked words, unclothed by any
convention, unspoiled by any deceit.

A good poem is a lover,
a great poem, a great lover,
the kind you never forget.



[written 1/20/20]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
Carber Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Eve
Alex Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 7:37 PM
"naked words, unclothed by any convention" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Agustin Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poet. God bless you.
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Gracias, mi amiga, y vaya con Dios tambien (I'm in a Spanish mood today)
Blodgett Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Indeed! We all need some love right now. So that one heart touches the other. Lonna
Carber Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:41 AM
So true, Lonna--thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Sara
Carber Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 9:13 AM
Sara, thank you very much!
Mishra Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Wow! A good poem is a lover...beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win :)
Carber Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Thank you, Aditi
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 1:05 PM
Great poem L.J, enjoyed very much, congrats on a shared 2nd place win!
Carber Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Thank you John, much appreciated!
Staton Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Loved reading this short but unforgettable poem about love of a well crafted poem.
Carber Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Valerie, and hello! Are you new to Soup?
Godwin Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 10:09 AM
LJ CARTER, HOW BLESSED AM TO HAVE BEEN LED TO THIS POEM!!! Every once in a seldom while a poem slams me in the most intoxicating, adrenaline soaring way because it succeeds where my own ink has not; it poetically and talented-ly amazes my all by laying out a feel I have long only succeeded in laying out in rough draft form, and that just inside my head. This is that - all that run on sentence said, this is. I'm faving it and thanking you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Carber Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, CAyCay, you have made my day! Sorry about the rhyme but your review made me happy because we both know how hard--and rare-- it is to create something meaningful--and then to have it so appreciated is the cherry on top!
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:02 PM
I just LOVE this. and I see it won a contest. I hope it won a top placement. this is a FAVE.
Carber Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Thanks Andrea-- I'm happy you like it!
Kauffman Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Hi LJ! Congratulations on your winning placement! I loved this poem when I first read it and enjoyed reading it all over again. Really nice work and it does remind me of the Song of Songs!
Carber Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Thanks again, Sam!
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Wow, awesome, LJ. Unforgettable. A FAVE.
Carber Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Line--I'm glad you liked it.
Ward Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Thank you for entering my contest, L. J. Carber and well done for getting into the favoured seven! Julia
Carber Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 11:13 AM
Thank you--I am honored.
Kauffman Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Hi LJ! This piece just drips with powerful imagery on every line! And I love the intertwining of the metaphors! Congratulations on your placement!
Carber Avatar
February 13, 2020 at 11:15 AM
Thanks Sam-- I did kind of sex it up--but somehow it seems apropos with poetry [look at Song of Songs!]
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