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The Caress of Words

When I read a poem that breathes, pulsing wildly, alive with its own heartbeat, relentless, compelling in its desire, I feel touched as if by another, feeling some unseen hand brushing my hair, lips light as air licking the flesh near my own sojourning heart.... And I return the caress as my hand glides ever questing o'er the soft and solid paper, my eyes rolling over the printed pages like a hawk seeking prey, looking with the desire of the wild at the naked words, unclothed by any convention, unspoiled by any deceit. A good poem is a lover, a great poem, a great lover, the kind you never forget. [written 1/20/20]

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Date: 5/1/2022 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/2/2022 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Eve
Date: 4/29/2022 7:37:00 PM
"naked words, unclothed by any convention" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/30/2022 9:56:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 4/29/2022 8:03:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poet. God bless you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/30/2022 9:55:00 AM
Gracias, mi amiga, y vaya con Dios tambien (I'm in a Spanish mood today)
Date: 3/7/2022 7:18:00 AM
Indeed! We all need some love right now. So that one heart touches the other. Lonna
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/12/2022 10:41:00 AM
So true, Lonna--thanks!
Date: 9/22/2020 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/22/2020 9:13:00 AM
Sara, thank you very much!
Date: 5/23/2020 6:51:00 PM
Wow! A good poem is a lover...beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/24/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi
Date: 5/23/2020 1:05:00 PM
Great poem L.J, enjoyed very much, congrats on a shared 2nd place win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/24/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thank you John, much appreciated!
Date: 3/6/2020 7:51:00 AM
Loved reading this short but unforgettable poem about love of a well crafted poem.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/6/2020 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Valerie, and hello! Are you new to Soup?
Date: 3/1/2020 10:09:00 AM
LJ CARTER, HOW BLESSED AM TO HAVE BEEN LED TO THIS POEM!!! Every once in a seldom while a poem slams me in the most intoxicating, adrenaline soaring way because it succeeds where my own ink has not; it poetically and talented-ly amazes my all by laying out a feel I have long only succeeded in laying out in rough draft form, and that just inside my head. This is that - all that run on sentence said, this is. I'm faving it and thanking you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/1/2020 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, CAyCay, you have made my day! Sorry about the rhyme but your review made me happy because we both know how hard--and rare-- it is to create something meaningful--and then to have it so appreciated is the cherry on top!
Date: 2/21/2020 9:02:00 PM
I just LOVE this. and I see it won a contest. I hope it won a top placement. this is a FAVE.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/22/2020 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Andrea-- I'm happy you like it!
Date: 2/13/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hi LJ! Congratulations on your winning placement! I loved this poem when I first read it and enjoyed reading it all over again. Really nice work and it does remind me of the Song of Songs!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/14/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thanks again, Sam!
Date: 2/13/2020 10:33:00 AM
Wow, awesome, LJ. Unforgettable. A FAVE.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/13/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Line--I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 2/13/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest, L. J. Carber and well done for getting into the favoured seven! Julia
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/13/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thank you--I am honored.
Date: 2/12/2020 5:23:00 PM
Hi LJ! This piece just drips with powerful imagery on every line! And I love the intertwining of the metaphors! Congratulations on your placement!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/13/2020 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Sam-- I did kind of sex it up--but somehow it seems apropos with poetry [look at Song of Songs!]

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