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The Cardboard Man

THE CARDBOARD MAN He spent a year in Vietnam Oh what a horrible shame He returned home, but his mind stayed there He hardly knew his name He walked the halls of the nearest VA But treatment didn't help A cardboard box became his home That is where he slept You may see him on the interstate With a crudely lettered sign Declaring that he'll work for food But little work does he find He makes his way back to his box Only to find that it is gone Taken by the city street crew And now he has no home He roams the street seeking a haven Where he may pass the night Dirty, smelly, and long unshaven What a tragic sight They find him huddled in a doorway This man without a bed He served his country honorably But now the cardboard man is dead 11 November 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/14/2013 1:45:00 PM
A good write . Profound and emotional. a sad commentary on our vets who come home and are forgotten.
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Date: 11/4/2011 10:13:00 AM
Curtis excellent write, a well deserved win..David
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Date: 11/3/2011 5:08:00 PM
Congrats Curtis on a top notch win with this excellent entry on the cardboard man luv.. powerful and profound words ..
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Date: 11/3/2011 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Do You Know The Cardboard Man" contest Curtis. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2011 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this lovely write, Curtis
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Date: 11/3/2011 3:23:00 AM
I will send this to my nurse friends at the Dayton VAMC....wonderful write, friend..So full of truth. They served honorably but we dishonor them, don't we? GWendolen
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:51:00 PM
This is superb, my friend. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/2/2011 6:48:00 AM
A wonderful write..I would put this at the top of the list...this should go to the Veterans Admin..BG
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Date: 11/1/2011 11:17:00 PM
This is so sad and all too common..well done...love,Deb
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