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The Captain Sails Atop the Storm

Like sitting upon a sail at the storm’s peak, riding its mastery, and black and blue artistry. Underneath the vessel’s feet, it’s troubled us to flip us end to end, to break its back. Pale is the moon under many a gossamer sheet of the criminal-clouds. The sun likewise quivers, a sickly-green hue, as the seaweed, underneath the careening boat, moves either like tentacles or woman’s full-length hair, underneath our coffin. The teeth of the sea seethes, it’s vengeance sure. Its waves long to crush the wooden bones. Blast of the storm’s nostril, like an explosive bull, and the bolts of lightning like a game of competitive darts. Like sitting upon a sail at the storm’s peak, riding its mastery, and black and blue artistry. I laugh with maniacal eyes. I scream at its pleasure. It boasts. It taunts. The ants below my eyes, tossed to and fro, caught in an onboard net of spilling waves. The storm suddenly yawns, momentarily forgets to care. The sun and the moon both force their way through. It is the darndest thing that was seen that day. The golden sun and the silver moon, joined by sunrise and sunset, bloom over the horizon. The jaws of the sea dropped, calmly looking on, a bit unsettled and cowering. “Not this time,” I say with a wink. I nod at the sun and moon. I slink down the pole and tell the wet and sniveling swabbies to “clean the deck.” My compass points toward the treasure. The weak knees and minds of all on board will be strongly dealt with. Nothing will delay my task. I will get my wife back! 8/22/2022

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Date: 8/22/2022 8:45:00 PM
All that effort for a wife?! What would King Solomon say?! lol. Seriously, a gripping narrative. Thanks, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2022 4:59:00 AM
Oh this Captain was quite serious. LOL! If all of your wives were in danger, well go after them. Concubines often got left in the shuffle. Blessings, dear one.
Date: 8/22/2022 6:36:00 PM
Great image of sailing over a turbulent sea. I love all the comparisons used especially the one......"of the storm’s nostril, like an explosive bull, and the bolts of lightning like a game of competitive darts." Beautiful penning, dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! Glad you liked the comparison. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/22/2022 11:37:00 AM
In Malta we have a proverb: the sea has a soft belly but it is also hardheaded. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 2:10:00 PM
Love that! Thanks :)

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