The Captain Dies By Suicide

“Charm'd magic casements, opening on the foam 
                Of perilous seas, in faery lands forlorn.”

John Keats Ode to a Nightingale
“Strange to find a sea captain quoting Keats.”
The Ghost and Mrs. Muir
She knows nothing about the sea, the sails or thee, your perilous tongue swimming with the sharks. The captain dies by suicide - nay. stupidity - aye. She’s protected, captured by his salty speech. Oft the wind carries its scent of aftershave - nay, again, for the bearded captain scowls, transcends with this blasted widow scores a poetic love. 11/19/2019
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Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:10 PM
this is so interesting and ghostly!! Very nice one, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Barden Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Oh, this is marvelous, (and fav-ing) - The Ghost and Mrs Muir is a favorite movie AND TV series, (which I have on DVD!! Gene Tierney and Rex Harrison were perfection ... and I got to meet Hope Lang many years ago - a treat! One of the early poems I wrote here was "A Crow's Command", and I have written a few others since with that classic seafaring theme I love. This is superb in every way, and I must share with my fam, who loves the same. Great work, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Thank you so much! A big hug :) I was just thinking about the tv series. I read your poem - so awesome!!
Green Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 8:58 AM
I could feel the frigid winds coming off of the salty waves as I read this wonderful tale of unlikely lovers. Really well written Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thanks, Chris!
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